下面是小编为大家整理的托福写作的黄金策略介绍，本文共13篇，供大家参考借鉴，希望可以帮助到有需要的朋友。本文原稿由网友“在路上_SZ”提供。
篇1：托福写作的黄金策略介绍
托福写作的黄金策略介绍
一、新托福(iBT)写作简介：
新托福写作共分两个部分，计时五十分钟。第一篇称为Integrated Writing; 第二篇称为Independent Writing.第一篇要求考生用三分钟先看一段文章，再听一段两分钟左右的听力材料，然后在二十分钟内写一篇150—225字左右的文章。
第二篇是独立写作，其形式与旧托福无太大差异。现有的题目库就是我们最好的准备材料。鉴于许多考生对此形式并不熟悉，特做此文。
二、写作高分八大黄金策略：
1.词汇要求：按笔者对托福写作题认真分析和多次参加托福考试经验，我认为词汇的要求应该是4000—5000个积极词汇。其中，学习词汇三个重中之重便是：①动宾搭配。 ②介宾搭配。 ③修饰原则。 此乃应对新托福写作词汇要求之三大利器。 ??
2.语法突破：其中必备四大语法结构即是：①句子结构 ②从句 ③非谓语动词 ④倒装、强调、平行结构、一致;?
3.思路拓展：有的考生英语水平虽好，但常常苦于没有思路。那针对这种情况，我们对思路扩展提出两种方法，能迅速有效帮助学生解决这个问题。①归类法 + ②总括法??
4.审题原则：如何审题，决定了你是否能在有效时间内迅速进入状态。对此，我们制定出审题三原则： ①定位 ②概括 ③分类?
5.结构安排：清晰的结构将使阅卷人对你留下一个好的印象。除此，你也能更加有效的安排自己的段落。三种方法助你一臂之力：1平衡式 2 倾向式 3 一波三折式?
6.范文分析：
对满分作文的有效分析将帮助你迅速建立起自己的语库和资料源。对范文分析，其方向有五：
①词的使用 ②句的联系 ③段落安排 ④逻辑构造 ⑤整体一致??
7.模板使用：针对综合写作和独立写作，我们众多教师会分门别类帮助大家建立起自己模板库。这样，你不仅可在考场上节约大量时间，也可冲击高分。其中，模板共分三类：
①通用模板 ②专用模板 ③分类模板??
8.练习讲评：
英文有曰：The taste of pudding is in eating. 对写作，唯有通过大量练习，不断修改，我们才能体会其真正的奥秘。因此，环球的课堂上给大家提供了大量的练习机会。通过写作，修改，讲评三部曲，相信大家一定会达到从量变到质变的飞跃。
新托福写作备考指南整理
integrated writing/综合写作:要求考生在3分钟内读一篇文章，然后听一个lecture，在20分钟内根据文章和lecture内容写一篇250字左右文章比较两者的观点。(注：文章内容和lecture内容注定是对立的，如果你考的不是对立的，那只有一种可能，你的RP次到了人神共愤的地步了。)
综合写作的八股在于：第一段指出reading passage和lecture内容是对立的;第二、三、四段从三个方面/点来说明他们的内容是怎样对立的;第五段总结一下他们之间确实是对立关系。
independent writing/独立写作：给定一个题目，要求考生在30分钟内写出400字左右的文章，要求逻辑清晰，论述有力，无明显的语法和词法错误。
独立写作八股在于：第一段陈述你的观点，支持哪一方;第二、三、四段从三个方面论述你的观点;最后一段总结一下，综上所述，某某观点是正确的。
既然新托福两篇作文都是八股文，那必然有各自的八卦写法，接下来，让我们来看一下怎样写八股托福作文。
综合写作：托福写作模板，套模板，一定要套模板!
理由：1，模板让你的思路更加清晰，这是ETS要求的。
2，20分钟!开玩笑，怎么凑到300字?当然要用模板!
3，阅读听力我都不怕，就怕作文，写三句话错两句，我怎么得26+?当然还是用模板，既然是模板就意味着是你精挑细选的句子，保证了写作的质量!
提醒：1，模板要富于变化，一篇只能用5句那你就要准备10句!
2，模板不能一味照搬别人的，避免重复!
3，保证模板里的句子没有语法和用词错误!
一般来说，大家把一下几个句子稍微变形，即完成了综合写作第一步
1. The lecturediscusses…which differs from the main idea in the reading that… (用于第一段)
2. The professo
rmade the point that …The reading , in contrast, held a different view .(用于第一或第二三四段)
3. Another important pointshowed in the listening material is that …but the reading presents aconflicting idea that…(用于第三四段)
4. Finally, the professorstated that ...which challenges the standpoint made by the writer who saidthat...(用于第四段)
5. In general, the professordiscussed the problem of …that the reading viewed in acontrary\\opposing\\different angle.(最后总结段)
6. According tothe lecture… on the other hand \\while the reading stated that …
7. The professor made the pointthat… on the contrary\\ in contrast\\ however, the writer demonstrated an ideathat…
8. The lecturesupports\\illustrates the idea that…
9. The lecturecontradicts\\refutes\\ is contrary to\\ is the opposite of the idea that…
10. Contrary tothe belief in the passage that …the professor says that…
11. The professorrefutes the viewpoint showed in the passage that… by saying that…(6-11均用于第二三四段)
大家可以把连接词变化一下，把动词变化一下或句式稍变，11句话灵活运用。除了模板以外，综合写作我们还需要做什么?
做笔记，做听力笔记!99.9%的情况下，综合写作的主体内容是三个对立的观点，所以大家只要把这个三个点记下来，然后把阅读里相应的三点抠出来放到模板里面去，你的综合写作就做完了，就是这么简单!
独立写作怎么办?
很遗憾，独立写作没有固定的模板，起码我没用过。没有模板怎么能叫八股文呢?独立写作的八股在于它的题目很固定，如果不信，请翻看OG上给出了那几百道例题。绝大部分题目是：.和.相比，你觉得哪个更好/更合理?/你更支持哪个观点?一部分题目是：....你怎么办?/你是怎么看的?
还有极小部分发散性题目很少考，而前面两种其实是一种题目，不信?你看个例子。
Q：Yourschoolhas received a gift of money. What do you think is the best way foryourschool to spend this money? Use specific reasons and details tosupport yourchoice.
这个题目没有给你二选一的选项，我们要做的是把它转化为二选一，捐款的用途无外乎这么几种：建图书馆、体育馆(还可细分篮球、.。。。)、学生公寓、办公大楼、买电脑。。。这么多选项你只要从中挑选一个，然后把这个和其他的相比较这篇文章你就搞定了!
除了题目固定之外，写作的手法同样很固定。其实大家只要熟读范文100篇，不会背书也能写。而且能写高分作文。具体的方法就是在论坛找到那谁谁谁的185篇满分作文，挑选其中你觉得写的不错的把其中铺垫的句型，转换词挑出来，背一背，背多了你会发现所有的满分作文其实是一个套路出来的流水线作品(除极少数作文)。流水线作文谁不会写呢?那满分作文其实很简单的!
关于托福作文的几个比较常见的问题：
1,多少字数合适?OG上说综合写作150-225，独立写作300。个人认为综合250字，独立300+比较妥当，但是不用追求太多的字数，有字数没质量的作文绝对不能得高分。但是有质量的作文字数肯定少不了，ETS要求Use specific reasons and details to supportyour choice，你想想达到这个要求的作文字数能太少吗?
2,要准备多少时间? 三到四周
第一周把..85范文看透，每个题目自己都分析一下，同时学习好的句子。后面两周每天练一篇综合一篇独立，练手感，同时练打字速度。(用老键盘练，不能用笔记本键盘)
3，托福作文这么八股，考了高分其实不算什么，为了达到北美大陆以后我们写起论文来杠杠的，我们一起为提高整体英语综合实力努力吧。多听多读多背多说多写多练多译!
托福写作考试题目的解析
1.10
综合写作：
阅读online education不好：
1. 不知道都学了什么课，和传统教育的课程不一样
2. 学生缺乏social ability
3. 学生的作业会作弊
听力：
1听力是说网上课程很容易被检验，有paper啥的，还有学校的名誉，更容易鉴别学生是不是获得了学分或者学位;
2学生在网络课程中也可以讨论，也是训练了交流能力的，现在全球化这么厉害，有优势;
3网络学生的paper更容易被check
独立写作：
People should not pay for the public transportation. Do you agree or disagree?
1.18
综合写作：
阅读说一个叫Easter Island的地方离南非3300公里，关于这个地的第一批居民，认为是南非来的：
1是南非人擅长航海，虽然帆和船都很破，但是能到;
2说这个地方的墙和南非的墙很一样，技术上看是一致的，石头砌的墙;
3说这个岛上的植物和南非的很像等等，
听力：
1说是没有physical的证据说明南非人来过，而且从供给上似乎很难解释这么长的距离迁徙
2墙外看是一样的，但是岛上的墙中空，其实不一样
3就是说植物可能是洋流带过来的等等
独立写作：Agree or disagree: it is important for families to regularly eat their meals together.
1.24
综合写作：
阅读反对congestion pricing systems：
1使得城里消费下降。举伦敦为例。
2会增加穷驾驶的负担。
3会使得有些需要delivery的生意的成本增加。例如餐厅，需要一天运好几次新鲜的肉品。每次都要收费就很贵。
听力：
1伦敦的消费下降是因为economic recession。数据显示消费人口不减，所以是因为每个人的消费力下降。
2城里的收费已经很高了，高速路或什么的，不在乎在加这么一点，而且有些人因为这样，所以搬到城里住。
3 congestion pricing systems会使得人们将每次载运的小量变成大量，减少货运次数，对空气也好。
独立写作：没有共同兴趣和个性的人能彼此成为朋友吗?
2.14
综合写作：
阅读：
1. beekeeper没给足够的营养给bee，bee的主食是pollen和honey。给了一个example某地方的农场习惯给一种用玉米做成的东西给bee当supplement。营养不够。
2.一种mites身上带有X.X virus。当这virus传染到bee身上后，其他bee会把传染到的bee给赶出hive去。
3.一种X.X fungus，当fungus传染到bee身上，bee出去找食物时，身体很weak就死在外面。
听力:
1.这个玉米做成的supplement，在美国只有big farm才用，而small farm也有CCD的情况，所以解释不成立。
2.这种mites不容易进入到hive里。
3.这种fungus不管在normal one或是有CCD的hive里都很常见，所以也不成立。
独立写作：To be well-informed, one should get information from different news sources. Do you agree or disagree?
2.22
综合写作：
阅读small dinosaur 死于以下三个原因：
1 trapped in the mud，困死了。
2恐龙的骨头里有chemical element污染的痕迹
3 sudden flood把它们给淹死了。
听力：
1如果被泥困住，会挣扎。
2跟dinosaur 同生的一种fish都没死，恐龙就死了
3恐龙的head是towards its tail的，从这个姿势判断，恐龙先死后被flood淹了。
独立写作：
Do you agree or disagree with the follow statement: should the purpose of television be all educative, not entertaining?
2.28
阅读斑马身上条纹的作用：
1在被追捕过程中有一种optical illusion 会让捕食他们的动物对于他们的距离远近产生错觉从而在不正确的时候进行leap从而无法抓到他们
2其次是让敌人无法分清个体和一群
3还有便于自己藏匿在草丛中
听力：
1其实在捕杀斑马的动物中 它们从不存在leap的阶段所以也就不存在optical illusion的作用
2敌人对条纹还是纯色无区别，个体还是一群也没区别
3斑马一般不会藏起来，而是暴露在开放的草原
独立写作：Teachers should be paid at least as much as doctors, lawyers or business leaders are paid. Do you agree or disagree?
3.7
综合写作：
阅读Why一种鱼jump out of water：
1. avoid predators
2. for communication
3. prehistoric7 ?$ c2 s- t2 l9 h3 k
听力：
1. alligator(短吻鳄)很少
2. they are not social animals
3. they're not like whales
独立写作： ”It is better to use ones knowledge and experience to solve the problems than ask others for advice.“ Do you agree or disagree?
篇2：托福写作四大黄金原则
1)作文要切题
为了确保作文的整体质量，首先要做到文章必须切题。这似乎已经超出英文的范围，只是一种思维方式，其实不然。道理很简单：文章要切题，比较重要的是看懂英文作文题目。题目看不懂，或者理解错误，那么你的作文写得再好，也是不切题的。
2)结构要严谨
除了切题以外，确保托福作文整体质量的另外一个主要方面是“结构严谨，条理清楚”。比较实效的方法就是“五段法”。
第一段：Position & Three Reasons
第二段：Unfolding of Reason 1
第三段：Unfolding of Reason 2
第四段：Unfolding of Reason 3
第五段：Repetition of Position
3)条理清晰
要想用好“五段法”，关键在于“三条理由”。不管遇到什么题目，都要想出三条理由来。有了三条理由，整篇文章的段落和构思也就基本完成了，余下来的任务就是如何去扩展思想。
4)分段要合理
如果你能够按照上述方法去写作文，那么你的文章就能达到：观点明确，理由充足，阐述清晰，前后呼应，字数符合要求，为250-300字。
篇3：托福写作四大黄金原则
一、新托福（iBT）写作简介：
新托福写作共分两个部分，计时五十分钟。第一篇称为Integrated Writing； 第二篇称为Independent Writing.第一篇要求考生用三分钟先看一段文章，再听一段两分钟左右的听力材料，然后在二十分钟内写一篇150—225字左右的文章。
第二篇是独立写作，其形式与旧托福无太大差异。现有的题目库就是我们最好的准备材料。鉴于许多考生对此形式并不熟悉，特做此文。
二、写作高分八大黄金策略：
1.词汇要求：按笔者对托福写作题认真分析和多次参加托福考试经验，我认为词汇的要求应该是4000—5000个积极词汇。其中，学习词汇三个重中之重便是：①动宾搭配。 ②介宾搭配。 ③修饰原则。 此乃应对新托福写作词汇要求之三大利器。
2.语法突破：其中必备四大语法结构即是：①句子结构 ②从句 ③非谓语动词 ④倒装、强调、平行结构、一致；
3.思路拓展：有的考生英语水平虽好，但常常苦于没有思路。那针对这种情况，我们对思路扩展提出两种方法，能迅速有效帮助学生解决这个问题。①归类法 + ②总括法
4.审题原则：如何审题，决定了你是否能在有效时间内迅速进入状态。对此，我们制定出审题三原则： ①定位 ②概括 ③分类
5.结构安排：清晰的结构将使阅卷人对你留下一个好的印象。除此，你也能更加有效的安排自己的段落。三种方法助你一臂之力：1平衡式 2 倾向式 3 一波三折式
6.范文分析：
对满分作文的有效分析将帮助你迅速建立起自己的语库和资料源。对范文分析，其方向有五：
①词的使用 ②句的联系 ③段落安排 ④逻辑构造 ⑤整体一致
7.模板使用：针对综合写作和独立写作，我们众多教师会分门别类帮助大家建立起自己模板库。这样，你不仅可在考场上节约大量时间，也可冲击高分。其中，模板共分三类：
①通用模板 ②专用模板 ③分类模板
8.练习讲评：
英文有曰：The taste of pudding is in eating. 对写作，唯有通过大量练习，不断修改，我们才能体会其真正的奥秘。因此，环球的课堂上给大家提供了大量的练习机会。通过写作，修改，讲评三部曲，相信大家一定会达到从量变到质变的飞跃。
篇4：托福写作四大黄金原则
概括和组织
阅读文章一般结构清晰，观点明确，学生往往能一眼看出哪个是中心句，哪个是举例：这种情况很浅显，学生只需要挑出中心句，然后稍微换上几个同义词，或是改动一下句子结构，阅读的主要观点便出来了，而且也不是抄袭阅读的。另外，在中心句不是很明显的时候，学生则需要分析给的几句话，或者是从后文的例子与解释中，去对应观点句里的关键词，这样就能锁定文章的主要观点了。
自制模板
托福综合作文模板好使，但不见得这个模板是适合你的。有些模板措辞复杂，句式冗长，而使用了这些模板的人，往往是为了将就模板，限制了自己的发挥：每每写的文章，200个单词里面，自创的，只有50个左右。也就是说，除了模板给出来的套话，实际涉及阅读和听力观点和信息的文字，非常的少，内容非常单薄，自然分数不会高过25。
要用模板的话，就用自己的托福考试写作的模板。用自己平时说话的自然方式来表的，形成了自己的思维方式，用起来肯定是相当自然的。怎么形成自己的模版呢?用至少20 道题练手：看自己是习惯先总结听力观点，然后与阅读观点一一对应去写，还是听力观点和阅读观点分成两部分去概括，然后再集中论述他们的关系;有了框架，就到实质了。论述的时候，一般的学生都只是一句大话带过，而没有将足够的证据或细节摆上。
这个是我们应该杜绝的。只有简练到位地论述了，才能体现出阅读和听力观点的关系来。论述就应该：1. 合理使用阅读和听力的例子，但不是照抄，而要概括;2. 注意例子和观点的对应，切忌张冠李戴。3. 阅读听力缺一不可，要两条腿走路。
检查
托福作文写完后，一定要留出至少3分钟来检查。尤其是托福写作中的基础拼写，时态，以及单复数搭配是否有错，及时更改。
【托福写作】托福综合写作满分模板分享
一、万能段子
1. in the lecture, the professor made several points about ...... .the professor argues that..... However, the reading passage contends that ......The professor's lecture casts doubt on the reading by using a number of point that are contrary to....
1.在演讲中，教授对……提出了几点看法。教授认为.....然而，阅读文章认为……教授的演讲使人对……的阅读产生怀疑。 使用一些与...相反的观点
2. the first point that the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that....According to the professor...... .....differs from the reading in that the reading states.....The point made by the professor casts doubt on the reading becasue....
2.教授对阅读产生怀疑的第一点是……根据教授的观点……与阅读的不同之处在于阅读状态…… 教授提出的观点由于阅读而引起怀疑。
3. Another point that the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is....The professor claims that.....However, the reading states.....This point is contradicted by.....
3.教授用来对读物产生怀疑的另一点是....教授声称.....但是，读物陈述了.....这一点与.....相矛盾。
4. Finally,the professor stated that ,on the contrary of reading,......In other words,.....This directly contradicts what the reading passage indicates,because.....
4.最后，教授说，与阅读相反，……换句话说，这与阅读段落所表明的直接矛盾，因为……
5. In the lecture, the professor made several points about...The lecture argues that.....The points made by the professor agree with .....In fact, the examples used by the professor support...
5.在讲座中，教授提出了关于...的几点意见。讲座认为.....教授的观点与......事实上，教授使用的例子支持...
6. Furthermore, the professor bolsters the reading by stating that....
The professor claims that.....This point agrees with the reading ,which contends that.....
6.此外，教授还说：
教授声称.....这一点与读物一致，认为这是.....
7.Finally, the professor states that ,in support of the reading,.....Specifically,.....This perfectly reinforced what the reading passage indicats because
7.最后，教授指出，为了支持阅读，……特别是……这完美地增强了阅读段落所指示的内容，因为
二、托福写作参考范文：
The lecture refutes the passage’s position that the science of archaeology came across severe problems and limitations over the 20th century by pointing out that the new guidelines actually gave a boost to the development of archaeology in Great Britain.
演讲通过指出新的指南实际上促进了英国考古学的发展，驳斥了这段话的立场，即考古学在20世纪遇到了严重的问题和局限。
First, contrary to the passage’s claim that a large number of valuable artifacts were lost to construction as construction workers and companies might turn a blind eye to the artifacts and potential sites of scientific value, the new guideline urges any construction mustn’t be commenced before a thorough examination is done by professional archaeologists to confirm whether the site is of any archaeological research interest or value. After negotiation with the construction company and the local government officials, the archaeologists will then put forward a plan to either excavate the site or to build around it.
首先，与该段落声称大量有价值的文物丢失给建筑业相反，因为建筑工人和公司可能对文物和具有科学价值的潜在地点视而不见，新准则要求在开始之前不得进行任何建筑专业考古学家会进行彻底检查，以确认该遗址是否具有任何考古研究兴趣或价值。与建筑公司和当地政府官员协商后，考古学家将提出一项计划，以挖掘该遗址或在其周围建造建筑物。
Second, the lecturer argues that there is a misunderstanding about who is paying the bill for the archaeological research as the passage believes that the government budget for the archaeological preservation is awfully inadequate. In fact, the guideline requires that all the examination and other related work be paid by the construction company. As a result, the increasing research resources enable archaeologists to conduct their research in a far bigger range than before.
其次，讲师认为，对于谁为考古研究支付费用存在误解，因为这段话认为，政府用于考古保护的预算远远不够。实际上，该准则要求所有检查和其他相关工作均由建筑公司承担。结果，越来越多的研究资源使考古学家能够在比以前更大的范围内进行研究。
Third, while the passage mentions that the number of jobs available in the market dropped dramatically and that archaeological research ceased to be a hobby for amateurs, the lecturer provides evidence to prove that the increasing market demand made the twentieth century the best time for archaeologists as every step of the research would be paid according to the new guidelines. Jobs which didn’t exist in the past, such as examining the site before construction, drafting plans for preservation, processing information in archaeological manner, writing articles based on the findings, are now getting more and more popular.
第三，虽然文章提到市场上可提供的工作数量急剧下降，考古学研究不再是业余爱好者的爱好，但讲师提供了证据来证明不断增长的市场需求使20世纪成为考古学家的最佳时机。研究的每一步都将根据新准则进行支付。过去不存在的工作（例如在施工前检查场地，起草保护计划，以考古方式处理信息，根据发现撰写文章）现在越来越受欢迎。
篇5：托福黄金写作教育类题目及
教育类题目
1) Some people think that giving students time during a class to discuss ideas with each other is a good way to help students learn; others think giving students time for discussion is ineffective or a waste of time. Which idea do you agree with, and why?
2) Parents must have strict rules to help their children to be successful.
3) Some people believe that taking field trips (for example, going to the museum) is an important part of children’s education. Others believe that it is better for children to studying at school. Which opinion do you prefer?
4) The best way for a teacher to help students interested in a subject is to explain that subject will help them outside school.
5) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what field they study.
6) Universities should require all their students to learn about foreign cultures as well as their own culture.
7) Younger school children should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history.
8) Some people say that teachers and parents should decide what assignment or activities children should do after school. Others say that children should make these decisions on their own. Which view do you agree with?
9) Do you think children’s after school activities should be arranged or should be chosen by children themselves?
10) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: These days, children spend more time in doing homework or participating in organized activities related to school or sports. However, they should be given more time to do whatever they want.
篇6：托福黄金写作教育类题目及
范文题目：
It is more important to choose to study a subject that interests you than a subject preparing you better for a job or career. Do you agree or disagree?
题目有关教育中的”课程选择“并联系职业规划。需要学生从”选择适合学生职业发展的课程“或是”选择自己感兴趣的课程“中做出选择。
范文相关分析：
Education is one of the key words of our time, however, people's views differ greatly as to which should be the superior option of academic pursuit, to opt for courses conducing to future career or to focus on subjects that interest them. As I see it, compared with choosing subjects that can help young adults ready themselves for career challenges, to deliberately specialize in one's favorite courses is more commendable.
首段的结构：
背景-争议主题介绍(1句复杂句)+观点(选择感兴趣的)
由于运用了一句复杂句，首段内容结构很清晰，也在首段就体现了写作者的水平。复杂句用”people's views differ as to... to do...“这种形式替代“people's views are different about...，some people...，the other people...”这种需要用多个句子，也比较模板化的形式。学生可以参考使用。其中也不乏一些比较好的词汇，如academic pursuit学术追求，career challenges职业的挑战，deliberately谨慎地，specialize专门从事 ，commendable很好的
Opting for the courses in which one takes considerable interest will enjoy more visible merits. First, one's study motivation can be highly stimulated provided that one can choose subjects exerting a peculiar fascination on him or her. Conversely, people might generate career burnout even if they might get profit-making jobs.
本段给出第一个论点，学习感兴趣的课程的好处-激发学习动机，用两句话从正反两个角度-激发学习动机vs职业 倦怠-来论证。好的词汇，比如considerable相当大的，merit优点 ， study motivation学习动机，stimulate刺激， provided that条件是，exert 施以影响，peculiar fascination特殊的魅力 ，career burnout职业倦怠，profit-making jobs高薪职业.
Also, taking one's favorite subjects can fully tap his or her infinite potentials. Meanwhile, one can fully enjoy the process of learning and career life. Apart from that, it is also a sort of success if one can perfectly combine specialized knowledge with career ambition. Therefore, college students have sound reasons to select the courses that interest them.
本段给出其他论点，学习感兴趣的课程的好处-挖掘无限潜力、享受学习和职业、将兴趣和职业更好地结合。可参考用词有 tap his or her infinite potentials，career ambition.
Indeed, I have to concede that the acquisition of pragmatic courses might still have some benefits. Sure enough, job-related courses will help one outshine many candidates and successfully secure a decent job. That is why some people feel that education is a kind of investment and competitive courses such as engineering, science and technology can, in most cases, earn high interests. Thereby, what some people are concerned about is whether the course of their choice can lead to a profitable career. After all, career-related subjects can lay a solid foundation for climbing the career ladder.
让步段，实用性的课程也是有好处的，帮助提升就业竞争力。本段有很多好的表达方式，比如acquisition of pragmatic courses，Sure enough,help one outshine many candidates，secure a decent job，profitable career，climb the career ladder在职业上平步青云.
In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that even though choosing utilitarian subjects is never without merit, university students should still be encouraged to choose their favorite areas of study.
尾端重申观点：
应该鼓励学生选择感兴趣的课程。
总结：可以看到，写作者的英语功底很高，在很多表达方式上都没有“落入俗套”，在范文中没有出现某个概念是利用同一种方式重复表达的。很多词汇都可以加入同学们的“素材库”了。但是有一点，如果在内容中加入一些更具体的例子会更好一些。
托福考试作文范文:改变学校
托福考试作文范文：If you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
托福考试作文参考分析：
(1)提高效率;
(2)促进学生学习;
(3)更好的老师和学生的交流。
托福考试作文范文参考：
Talking of making an important change in my school, I'd like to suggest that our education system put more emphasis on the development of learning skills and applications of theories into practice instead of simply learning knowledge from books. The proposal is based on the reasons as follows.
For one thing, overemphasis on academic learning poses a threat because of confusing the purpose of learning. As school credit is usually considered the major criteria of academic learning, in a credit-driven school, one may try hard to learn simply for learning's sake. In other words, college students tend to blindly cram their brains with numerous texts and formulas while do not have a clear idea of what they really want to learn, why they need to learn, not to mention how the things they are learning are useful to the reality. An example is way that common ESL students learn English: they may spend several years in reciting grammar rules, but can hardly utter an English word in front of a foreigner.
Another reason that causes me to make the suggestion is the requirement of today's ever-changing knowledge economy time. With the increasingly accelerated pace of information explosion, one can hardly depend on knowledge from books that he or she has learned at school. Mastering learning skills and knowing how to apply the skills into practice are becoming indispensable than ever before. A recent survey conducted by educator shows that most students in our country lack the ability of using tools and solving problems compared with their counterparts in the United States. This informs us to take a serious look at our book-knowledge based education pattern.
In sum, it's high time for us to give a touch on our education pattern concerning the narrowness of book knowledge learning as well as the necessity of practical learning required by the contemporary world.
篇7：托福写作高分策略
托福写作高分你得这么做!
写作高分必备：
1.教师指导写作高分技巧
2.不断实践高分技巧
3.教师指点修改
技巧
1.学会快速审题-根据题干，判断题型，决定解题方式.
2.学会快速展开文章结构-具体包括开头段，论点，让步段，结尾段的具体展开技巧和语言点.
3.学会多样化展开中间段部分-学会写例子，细节，重逻辑串联，忌细节堆砌.
修改
写作高分，除了以上所提到的掌握技巧意外，另外需要的是各位宝宝们的不断践行;对于基础一般的同学一开始的过程会被骂的狗血淋头，因为文章惨不忍睹;等作文能够稳定24分左右以后;你所需要做的事情就是将那些写的已经能看的作文，通过教师指导修改成一篇真正的高分文章，最后一步嘛;当然就是背背背啦!这可比漫无目的的去背诵各式各样的范文提升的要快的多;因为你所背诵的文章思路是你自己的，大部分的语言组织也是你自己的。
下面就向各位宝宝们展示下什么叫做一篇投入心血的精心批改(黄色为题目;黑色为未批改的作文;红色为批改和建议部分;蓝色为整体评语);
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Environmental issues can be solved or improved in the future. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
文章优势：观点鲜明，结构明确，有例子和细节，语言表达尚可
需要改进的地方： 1.小语法错误 2.语言表达比较啰嗦 3.逻辑上很多地方不准确 4.致命伤：中间段2论点不切题， 段落内的论证逻辑不清晰。
这篇文章企图从两个角度论证环境会变好：
1.现在全球政府已经意识到，且开始行动- 第一段主体段逻辑没有问题
2.普通人的意识也正在逐渐养成。- 第二段主题段论点不扣题- 不应该表达：提出环境保护意识是有效的措施。而应该表达为： 跟过去比起来，现在的人们已经养成了保护环境的意识。 言下之意，就是现在和将来的人们会主动的去保护环境。
Some people consider that environmental problems can be more awful in the future for they believe that the more advent technology, the more pollution will come out(想表达科技越先进，污染问题越多 应该改为， the more advanced the technology is, the more environmental problems would pop up).(建议整个句子修改为：In today’s society, many people consider the environment problems could be more awful in the future for the advent of more technological products like the automobile would lead to more serious environmental contamination) However, I believe that environment will be better tomorrow because the every country of the world have been going to take action to face the circumstance issues and human have recognized the importance of protecting surroundings as time goes on(去掉the, 谓语动词三单，介词of改为the 时态改为完成式即可——- because every country in the world has prepared to take action to resolve environmental issue and the public has already recognized the importance of environmental conservation as time goes by ).
To begin with, environmental issues have become a major matter of concern for a number of countries. (添加过渡性短语- In this way,) This fact has led them to come up with many measures to solve the environmental problems(去掉后面的the 即 solve environmental problems). For instance, The United Nations Climate Change conference which about 192 countries attended was held in , it aimed to discuss and put forward acts to cope with climatic change problems(第一个专有名词后面从句改为：The United Nations Climate Change conference attended by 192 countries was held in 2009 with the collective goal, that is, coping with the issue of climate change). There is no doubt that(少用套句，改为： Undoubtedly,) it has good impact on the tendency of changing climate on the Earth(这句话语言表达和上一句有重复且时态表达有问题 改为: the conference was a good start symbolizing the cooperation of the whole world to address environmental issue). And this is a know as‘ save the human last chance ’of the meeting(不要另起一句，直接and并列句 即改为： … and it was known as a meeting of last chance to salvage human beings). Furthermore, more and more solar cars are produced, which are made to save energy to protect environment(furthermore表示递进or并列此处逻辑上不是很强， 改为：as a consequence, the number of solar vehicles has experienced a dramatic increase. ). In a word, all of the actions are in order to prevent our Earth from destroying( in order to如此用绝对的中式英文，且总结的句子表达出来的意思并不能帮忙总结这个段落，应该与论点呼应，表达出的大致意义应该是：因此可以看出，全球已经意识到环境问题，且政府以及采取了很多行动， 与下一段形成呼应 下一段应该以“普通人也养成了保护环境得意时”。 所以应该改成： In a word, governments throughout the world have reached an agreement to protect the environment and taken immediate effective and potent measures to avert continual environmental deterioration).
In addition, raising environmental awareness can be an effective method to prevent and control pollution(论点扣题，应该改为： In addition, current individuals have already cultivated the awareness of environmental preservation and contributed a lot to environmental protection). In contemporary society (in the …), many more people are concern about the environmental situation (are concerned about/ current environmental situation) . Another example of Beijing, which used to be an auto-dependent city, Shrouded by smothering smog for years, residents in Beijing have totally realized the severe consequences brought by heavy smog and are fully motivated to reduce the number of private cars, burn clean fuels and lead a low-carbon life (句子主干结构应该是：北京被雾霾笼罩很多年，因此北京人知道了后果，开始被激励去减少适用私家车，燃烧干净能源，过低碳生活。 首先逻辑上：这句话的中文实际就不是很扣论点，应该改为，北京人意识到雾霾的后果，开始养成了后续的这些习惯。 其次语言上： 北京被雾霾笼罩缺乏谓语。 建议整句话改为;Since citizens in Beijing shrouded by smothering smog for years realize the severe consequences of environmental pollution, they have gradually developed the habit of reducing the frequency of driving private cars, burning clean fuels and leading a low-carbon life). Therefore, government are required to offer more courses, videos and reports useful for raising public awareness on environmental protection in order to create a pleasant ecological environment with cleaner air(这句话的逻辑不通， 作者观点环境未来会变好， 这段的论证思路是; 普通人意识到保护环境-例子;北京人受到雾霾影响，因此改变了习惯。 接下来不应该说因此， 政府需要去提供更多课。 作者应该这样去表达， 与此同时，现在的政府也会去做一些事情去加强人们的意识。所以这句应该改为： Meanwhile, the government also endeavors to strengthen people’s awareness of environmental protection by offering more public courses and related educational TV programs to create a favorable ecological environment). The example shows that our environmental circumstances will gradually get better(总结句依然不扣题，应该改为，因此可以看出，现在普通人的行为已经发生了改变，他们的环保意识有利于将来环境质量的提升。所以表达为： Apparently, the behavior of common people has been changed and their strong consciousness of environmental protection is beneficial to the improvement of future environmental quality).
All in all, our environment will get better tomorrow. I feel hopeful that many more countries is going to take steps to face the environmental problems and more and more people have consciousness on the environmental protection. (小语法错误，另外句子不够精炼，谓语动词三单，is-are。 整句建议改为; the efforts made by both the worldwide governments and ordinary individuals can explain why I am convinced that environment in the near future will be improved. )
避免托福写作五大错误开头
一：中式英文人见人晕
典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
In our life， there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem。 For example， in the city centers of Shanghai， we can always see people mountain people sea there。
Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today’s society， there is no fairness in the business world。 For example， I always chopped when I go out buy things……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage。 I believe if a people always do bad things， he will get “baoying”。
二：废话连篇不知所云
典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
This topic is very interesting。 I’m very interested in talking about this topic。 Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题
In my opinion， it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。
Topic 2-Will modern technology， such as the Internet， ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?
Ok， this topic is a very good topic。 First， let me tell you a story： I have a friend， he likes go on the internet very much。 Every day， he uses internet to read news or play internet games。 So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life。
Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
Oh， this topic is surely very important。 Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!
三：语法错误惨不忍睹
典型失败案例：Topic-If children behave badly， should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?
About this problem， my think is if children behave badly， then parents are not right。 Because teach child is parent’s responsibility。 So we also punish parents too besides children is also should。
四：观点模糊态度暧昧
典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say。 Because I am still very little， only 17， and not married， so this topic is very difficult for me……
五：偏离主题无轨电车
典型失败案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education。 To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
I think to success， we must have a lot of important qualities。 To have these important qualities， we must learn a lot of things， for example， English， music tools， and etc。 We can learn these qualities from our teachers， our friends and from books。 All in all， we can learn from many places。
托福写作备考策略之独立话题
选取9月独立机经部分题目
1.Somestudents prefer to have their final grades determined by numerous small assignments, whereas others prefer to have their grades determined by only afew large ones. Which do you prefer and why?
2.An effective leader tries to make others feel they are parts of a decision.
3.If a city has an amount of money, which option listed in the following do you prefer?
Build a public garden to provide quiet environment to benefit all
Build a sports field for students in high school which doesn’t have its own.
4.Governmenthas done enough to educate people the importance of a balanced lifestyle and healthy eating.
5.In the past,people were more interested in improving their neighborhoods than they are today.
6.In the past,young people depended on their parents for making decisions. Today young people are better able to make decisions on their own.
7.It is better to relax by watching TV or reading a book than by doing physical exercises.
8.We should state our honest opinions even though people may disagree with us.
9.In order to succeed in a new job, the ability to adapt oneself to the new environment ismore important than excellent knowledge.
10.People spend too much time communication through social media and text messages.
11.There is noreason to be rude to another person.
12.Technology designed to make people’s life simpler in fact make peoples life morecomplicated.
13.Movies andTV programs made in your own country are more interesting compared to moviesand programs made in other countries.
14.It is as important for older people to study and lean new things as it is for youngpeople.
15.To remain happy and optimistic whenever you fail is more important than to achieve success.
16.It is important to know what is happening around the world, even if it does not affect your personal life.
实用方法介绍
丨1.常用论点/理由
针对独立写作的常见话题，大致可归成三类：个人类(关于学习、工作、休闲、做人的选择);古今类(题目中有明显的now… past … 让考生判断现在和过去在某一方面的比较);决策类(题目中通常有government这个词出现，讨论政府的投资或者政策，有些题目虽然没有government这个词出现，但如果涉及的是有社会影响力的话题，也可以划为政府类，比如 A/D Professional athletes such as the football playerand basketball player deserve high salaries that they are paid.)
1)个人类常用理由
学知识、练技能、拓展视野……..
工作机会、赚钱…….
交朋友、陪伴家人……. (合作、沟通) …….
品质(自信，独立，坚持，乐观 ) / 兴趣爱好
身体健康、放松心情…….
省时间、省钱、省精力………..
2)古今类常用理由
现代社会的优点：
教育: 先进全面鼓励个性
工作：种类丰富机会多
医疗：治愈缓解更多疾病
技术：网络电子产品汽车
公共设施：便利的交通娱乐购物餐饮
法律制度：保障个人权利
媒体：揭露真相传播信息
人与人：互动频繁、方便
经济进步：更充裕的钱和无助
世界和平：更少的战争伤亡
现代社会的缺点：
环境问题(污染，能源消耗)
生活压力(学习，工作)
欺骗敲诈
3)决策类常用思路
注：除了使用个人类常用理由，针对决策类这种和政府相关有社会影响力的题目，建议多角度讨论，一下是常见的讨论角度：
1.大众 individuals
对我们有什么用?(放松健康省钱知识关系等等)
是不是我们每个人都需要的?(大多数/ 小众)
2. 相关群体relativegroups
题目中谈论到的比如artists,scientists, athletes 等等
3. 企业companies
企业有钱，可以代替政府去投资有利可图的领域
4. 社会 Society
Economy(tourism), culture, safety, improvement …
丨2.对比段
通常来说，托福独立写作的论证写3段，上文介绍了最基本的常用理由，但有时候，因为各种原因只想出2个理由的时候，可以写一段对比段，即把对比论证写一段。
具体案例参考第三部分的机经详解
丨3.让步段
除了对比段之外，让步段也可以解决只有2个理由缺少第三个段落的问题。
具体案例参考第三部分的机经详解
丨4.拆分法/分情况讨论
针对一些比较抽象的独立写作话题，我们可以分情况讨论，或者对于关键词进行定义和拆分，在更加具体的情况下方便论证。
具体案例参考第三部分的机经详解
丨5.检验论点
没有标准答案，这是独立解题最自由的地方。但这并不意味着什么样的理由都可以作为论点并且展开段落的。课堂上，一些学生可以马上相处三个理由，但仔细探究，可能只有一个理由是可以作为论点的。
这里说一下三个检验标准：1.支持观点 2. 论点相互不重叠 3. 易于展开
丨6.灵活调整
根据ETS的出题，我们知道，题目是千变万化的，为了帮助学生更好的应对，老师们会总结出一些实用方法，对学生来说，比死记硬别、生搬硬套更重要的是，在题目的练习中，去运用这些方法，并且灵活的调整。
如果觉得一些常用理由不适合支持某一道题，那么就放弃这个理由;
如果只想出两个理由，那么可以加一个让步段或者对比段;
如果一道题直接用常用理由去支持很难，可以试着拆分法;
如果完全同意/不同意很难，可以试着两边倒;
如果题目中有绝对词，可以部分同意/不同意。
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实用方法在题目中的具体运用
使用第一部分的9月机经部分题目
1.Some students prefer to havetheir final grades determined by numerous small assignments, whereas othersprefer to have their grades determined by only a few large ones. Which do youprefer and why?
观点：small assignments
论点1：轻松
论点2：知识(学生复习;老师备课)
论点3：对比段/让步段
2.An effectiveleader tries to make others feel they are parts of a decision.
观点：agree
论点1：来自领导的尊重要员工更快乐积极
论点2：员工的参与促进想法的完善
论点3：对比段
3.If a city has an amount ofmoney, which option listed in the following do you prefer?
1)Build a publicgarden to provide quiet environment to benefit all
2)Build asports field for students in high school which doesn’t have its own.
版本A：
观点：选1)
论点1：relaxing
论点2：used byeveryone
论点3：让步段(承认2的好处指出显著缺点即优惠了一小部分人不公平)
版本B：
观点：选2)
论点1：healthy
论点2：mentality
论点3：补充建议(允许周末开放给市民)
4.Governmenthas done enough to educate people the importance of a balanced lifestyle andhealthy eating.
观点：Disagree
论点1： knowledge 宣传健康饮食的知识( 课程广告 )
论点2： pressure 减少学习和工作压力
论点3： money 建设更多更便宜的运动场所减轻人们的经济负担
注：这道题，用个人类的常用理由就可以解决，那么久不用多角度思考了~
5.In the past,people were more interested in improving their neighborhoods than they aretoday.
观点：Disagree
论点1：经济进步大家有时间和精力改善社区
论点2：沟通方便更好的解决社区问题
论点3：普遍受过教育有能力解决问题
注：三个古今类的常用理由，现代社会的优点
6.In the past, young people depended ontheir parents for making decisions. Today young people are better able to makedecisions on their own.
观点：Agree
论点1：Internet –丰富信息
论点2：Education – 培养独立
论点3：对比段
7.It is betterto relax by watching TV or reading a book than by doing physical exercises.
版本A：
观点：Physical exercise
论点1：health
论点2：cooperation
论点3：make friends
论点4：release pressure
论点5：让步段/对比段
注：有些题目，可以相处很多个有效论点，那就选择自己觉得好写的展开～
版本B：
观点：TV book
论点1：convenience;
论点2：knowledge andinspiration
论点3：让步段/对比段
8.We shouldstate our honest opinions even though people may disagree with us.
观点：agree
论点1：家庭
论点2：朋友
论点3：学习/工作
注：用拆分法解这道题，即把说实话放在生活中的三大场景下，便于进行具体论证
9.In order tosucceed in a new job, the ability to adapt oneself to the new environment ismore important than excellent knowledge.
版本A：
观点：Bothimportant
论点1：知识– 独立解决问题&自信
论点2：适应能力–效率&轻松
注：两边倒的题目，两个支持对象的各写一段，每一段设立有1-2个小论点，这样不用担心字数~
版本B：
观点：Agree
论点1：get alongwith different people
论点2：learn newknowledge
论点3：adjustmentality
注：对适应能力进行拆分，解读成和不同的人相处的能力、学习新知识的能力、调整心态的能力，这些都比固有的接触知识更重要，因为，世界一直在变啊~
10.Peoplespend too much time communication through social media and text messages.
观点：Disagree
论点1：Relaxing
论点2：Improvefriendship
论点3： Learning
11.There is noreason to be rude to another person.
版本1：Agree 常用理由 -mood - efficiency - opportunity
版本2：Agree 拆分法- 家庭礼貌- 工作礼貌 - 社交礼貌
12.Technologydesigned to make people’s life simpler in fact make peoples life morecomplicated.
agree
1) car –traffic jam; air pollution
2) internet – too much information to handle; false and misleading
3) digital devices – distraction (music; games; chat; online shopping)
注：把technology 拆分成三个主要方面，汽车、互联网、电子设备
13.Movies andTV programs made in your own country are more interesting compared to movies andprograms made in other countries.
观点：both interesting
Own country:1 共鸣理解2 喜欢的演员
Foreign country:1拓展视野2精彩的画面
14.It is asimportant for older people to study and lean new things as it is for youngpeople.
Agree
版本1：拆分法(对学习新知识诠释)
1 学习健康知识
2 培养爱好
3 学习使用电脑上网
版本2：常用理由
1 mentalhealth
2improve convenience
3communication with young people
15.To remainhappy and optimistic whenever you fail is more important than to achievesuccess.
Agree
1)mentalhealth
2)stimulateimprovement
3 )让步段(承认成功是可喜的但是生活的常态就是一直失败、努力、克服苦难、获得成功，也就是说，成功是个结果，那么占据生活主要的是那个过程，所以为了健康以及持久的成功，乐观积极更重要)
16.It is importantto know what is happening around the world, even if it does not affect yourpersonal life.
Agree
版本1：常用理由
1)relaxing
2)knowledge
3)communication
版本2：拆分法
1)medicalnews – health
2)political news – safety
3)economic news – money
篇8：托福黄金写作政府类题目
政府类题目
25) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is important for government to provide money for things that are beautiful not just for things that are practical.
26) In the times of economic crisis, local government often reduces the money they spend in some areas. In your opinion, if a local government is facing economic problems, which of the following areas should it spend less money on: libraries, public transportation, police.
27) In the times of economic crisis, local government often reduces the money they spend in some areas. In your opinion, if a local government is facing economic problems, which of the following areas should it spend less money on:1. Art 2 .Scientific research 3 .Parks and public gardens
篇9：托福黄金写作政府类题目
托福写作政府类话题题目多从以下几个角度考察：
1.涉及政府政策或是投资相关题目，比如
题目1：It is more important for the government to spend money on new buildings than to preserve historic or traditional buildings and homes...
题目2：It is important for the governments to provide money to things that are beautiful and not just for things that are practical.这类关于政府投资的话题。
2.涉及政府作用的话题
比如题目3：People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there's no need for the government to help them.
其他政府类话题题目：
Do you agree or disagree? The government should support scientific researches even though these researches have no practical use.
During times of economic crisis， which area of spending do you think the government should reduce: education， healthcare or support for the unemployed?
篇10：托福黄金写作政府类题目
关于政府政策，学生要了解的是常考领域和政府措施，就领域而言，有医疗、社会保障、环保、教育等。比如政府投资建设医疗设施、政府的医疗保障政策或者医疗保险;政府投资建设基础设施、政府出资救助地震洪涝等灾害;政府颁布法规取缔污染企业、加大环境保护力度等等。
一般学生可以从两个角度出发寻找思路，一种是政府在实行政策或措施或是投资时有没有给当地带来经济收入( financial benefit)或者刺激经济发展(stimulate economic development)。另一个角度则是政府是否通过该举措满足了人民的某种需求。
比如对于对于以上题目1，如果选择政府建设新房，从带来经济收入来看，房地产可以带动当地经济发展;又可以解决人的住房需求。选择修缮旧建筑，则是对历史建筑的保存，可以带动当地旅游业，也可以帮助当地人了解当地文化。
对于题目2，政府投资在一些外在美的建设上还是更实用的事务上。这一点从选择实用事务角度写思路更好找，可以从医疗、教育领域的相关投资来说明这些实用性的领域投资的重要性。
托福写作政府类话题答题素材词汇：
human development index HDI 人类发展指数
regulate 调节，管理
sensible policy 合理的政策
allocate money for… 为…拔款
budget 预算
tax revenue 税收
unemployment rate 失业率
workforce 劳动力
healthcare system 医疗体系
authorities 当局
priority 优先
democratic 民主的
lay down strict rules and regulations
Only when government pays heed to these issues and take feasible actions can the environment situation can be improved.
托福写作范文:应该接受家人还是政府的帮助
11月13日托福独立写作真题：
A/D: People can solve important problems in their daily life on their own or with the help from families; The help from the government is not necessary.
题目解析
题目大意：人们可以自己或通过家人的帮助来解决生活中的重大问题，所以政府的帮助是没有必要的。波波建议此题目选择不同意，即认为政府的帮助还是很有必要的，思考分论点的方向使用拆分，对题目中的抽象名词 important problems 拆分具体化为环境问题和教育问题，然后分别展开。
月13日托福独立写作题目：
Some teachers are just lecturing(speaking) on the class and students only take notes; some other teachers make their class time on discussion and projection and students sharing their ideas with their classmates. Which one do you prefer?
年11月13日托福独立写作题目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can solve important problems in daily life on their own or with the help from families, so the help from government is not necessary.
托福写作模板及参考答案：
托福写作范文参考一:
2016年11月13日托福独立写作范文：
In a society that changes as amazingly as ours, the role played by government in our daily life has been brought under the spotlight of mass media. Consequently, the general public and sociologists are wondering whether people can solve important problems individually or with the governmental support. Towards such a long running tug-of-war, I am inclined to claim that the help from government is necessary in the process of resolving important problems, especially in the aspects of protecting environment and addressing the disparity of educational resources.
In the first instance, consider the environmental issues. As is common sense, the deteriorating natural environment is so severe and complicated that the solution of such a problem is far beyond the reach of any individuals or families. The serious air pollution in China is a good case in point. Despite the fact that people can take some actions such as wearing masks or taking the public transportation to relieve the haze occurring frequently in the major cities of China in some degree, the problem cannot be radically solved. To illustrate, the major cause responsible for the smoggy weather is nothing but the emission of waste gas such as dust and smog from an appalling number of heavy-pollution factories. In this case, it is the government that can get rid of the fundamental cause by shutting down these plants and enacting laws or regulations to restrict their production, which can’t be achieved by any individuals.
In the second instance, the same logic goes to the educational problems. As is known to all, many school-age children in rural and remote areas are not able to receive education in school due to the lack of educational resources. According to a survey conducted by the Education Ministry in China in , approximately 3 million kids in the Southwest of China didn’t have the chance to get educated on account of lacking in tables, textbooks and even spacious classrooms. When confronted with the issue mentioned above, what individuals or families can do is quite limited. Undoubtedly, only the government has the adequate financial resources and power to allocate educational resources to those places. For example, the government of China builds nearly 10,000 primary schools called Hope School in the distant places, which alleviates the disparity in educational resources between different regions to a large extent.
Judging from what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that although the ability of individual or families is becoming stronger and greater than before, the help from government is of great necessity in the course of solving significant problems, especially those in the areas of education and environment.
2016年11月13日托福独立写作范文：
Taking a panoramic picture of the entire human history, what role should government play has caused incessant debates among scholars, politicians, and even common people on the streets. Some argue that we should get rid of any form of government and spare the government red tape, thus stop bureaucrats from wasting our hard earned tax dollar, while others believe that government can maintain stability of the community, provide social welfare and prevent unlawful conducts by leveraging the judicial branch. I, personally, am in favor of the latter view, meaning that citizens do need help from the government based on the following reasons.
First off, government has the means to leverage billions of dollars and invest in infrastructures, education, and social welfare, which is beyond the power of any individuals or institutions. Think about it, the transportation that we rely on commuting from home to work, like the subway, bus, and trains need multi millions dollar to construct and maintain. The train runs through lots of states and provinces, the highway covers a large expanse encompassing different regions, and a few individuals cannot make a good decision, and it should be only possible by overall decision made by the central government. An individual or family cannot balance the interests of all the people involved. Plus, education is also another important area, in which government should play its role. Generally, the tuition of private schools are far more costly the that of the public ones, and if there are only private school, how could the kids from these underprivileged families get proper educations. So, it is obvious that we rely on government in these aspects.
Additionally, people depend on government to resist foreign invasions and provide shelter in face of catastrophic natural disasters. For example, currently, Muslim extremists organization ISIS waged a few terrorist attack in major cities around the world, which incurred numerous casualties and colossal economics loss. A few countries have decided to deploy military to fight ISIS, and such costly project cannot be made possible by just a few individual, in fact, it takes officers, intelligence personnel and staff members to work together to win the war, which cannot be gathered together without the government. The same is true for natural disasters. For example, a magnitude 8.0 earthquake hit Nepal in the first half of this years, thousands of people were left homeless since the quake destroyed basically all the housing complex and apartments. It was the government and other institutions who provide temporary camp, medication and food to these victims who were traumatized both physically and mentally. Also, these timely assistance and monetary donation would not be possible without the arrangements made by the government.
All in all, with the above careful analysis, government is indispensable for the livelihood and well-being of the people since it can provide infrastructure, education and social welfare to the people, and protect citizens when emergencies happen, like wars and natural disasters. Indeed, people do need government in lots of aspects. (Words 498 By Meng, Yan)
托福独立写作范文：
How to raise students’ study efficiency puzzles both teachers and parents and whether to permit students to discuss or do projects during class remains a heated debate for many years. As for me, although some people may argue that group discussion can hardly be controlled, I still believe it is necessary for students to share their ideas with others and the following reasons and examples can support what I believe.
Firstly, involving group discussion or projection in the class can contribute to the deeper understanding of some complicated knowledge. To be more specific, students’ perspectives differ from a student to the other and the combination of different angles from students and their teacher can make those students more aware of the knowledge. Take a history class as an example. While learning the influence from dropping atomic bombs to stop The Second World War, students’ opinions will be diverse and then a group discussion is extremely necessary. The benefits of dropping the bomb could be obvious because the war that had lasted for a long time devastated the whole human beings and led to a huge economic slump. However, the behavior for dropping the mass destructive weapon is controversial because it left a great weakness for local ecosystem. As is known to all, the radiation caused by using nuclear weapons could not be erased and local species would suffer a lot. Apparently, after a heated discussion, students will understand the historic event more precisely and overall. As a result, permitting students to discuss during the class is highly advantageous.
Secondly, classes including group discussion or projection can be of more interests to intrigue students’ curiosity and enthusiasm. Specifically speaking, some subjects like Physics or Mathematics can be tedious and boring. Then, students can be easily distracted once teachers just give a long lecture and downplay the importance of involving students. Instead, by doing experiments and discussing, students will feel a part of the class and their study efficiency can experience a huge improvement. Gravitational law in the Physics that is complicated and not so attractive for most students can be better understood if teachers could permit students to observe a falling apple and measure the relation between the time of falling and distance. The process of exploring the truth and verifying those abstract theories is intriguing for most students. In this way, never will students lose their interests and concentration of the class.
To admit, group discussion or projection during class may generate some weaknesses. Students are too young to be self-controlled. Then, there might occur some irrelevant topics, like gossiping which NBA basketball player is worthier to gain the title of MVP when students are assigned to talk about the advantages of joining outdoor sports. However, the concern can be erased when teachers can give specific orders and supervise the whole process of discussion. For example, teachers can list several advantages and disadvantages of joining outdoor sports and require students to discuss the validity of them.
In a word, the way of teaching students with discussion and permission can be more effective and interesting.
篇11：托福写作评分标准及高分策略
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托福写作的评分标准
综合写作评分标准
1.内容的完整性和准确性。简单地说就是文章是否有将讲座中的关键信息点完整、准确地提取出来(通常情况下有三点)，并和阅读材料中的相关内容有效地一一对应。
2.文章的组织机构，词汇和语法的正确性和准确性。
独立写作评分标准
(1)有效回应题目，阐明文章主题。
(2).逻辑条理清楚，论证充分展开。
(3)内容连贯一致，衔接自然流畅。
(4)遣词造句地道，语言驾驭娴熟。
托福写作为什么难拿满分
一.逻辑匮乏
连贯地把一个观点言之成理地表达出来，是完成任何写作任务的第一要务，在英文写作中尤其要注意两点，第一不要被辞藻的华美和句式的复杂绕进去了，英文应该以几个关键词为骨架，再以此为基础进行增删修饰，所以不要文过饰非让自己的表达片段化;第二尤其要注意平行论点之间是否有重叠、交叉的地方，同时要注意事实，结果和基准之间是否处在一条直线上，是否在逻辑上具有一致性。
二.论据意识不强
托福写作评分标准当中对于“事实和论据”有着明确的要求，“口水话”是任何应试型写作的大忌。论据的积累事实上也应该成为重要一环，多积累可以信手拈来的材料;而事实论据也是大有文章可做的，最可靠的是数字，对数字的敏感度的培养应该从小开始，不能成为短板;其次是概括性的事实;最后要强调的是具体事例，此处必须明确的一点是具体事例写作绝对不等同把个人经历做成流水账，而是要加以概括。
三.遣词造句不地道
托福的阅卷人不知道看过多少篇以 “with the development of society”(随着社会的发展)开头的作文，这种毫无个人创建的模板化也只能保证一个更加平庸的分数。其次玩弄大词不用小词，不区分书面语和口语，都是由于平时不阅读，不积累所造成的。
四.冗余现象严重
如果我们试着把一段中文翻译成英文，再把这段译文和典范的英文进行对比，就可以发现大多数人的翻译都要比典范英文长一截。这恰恰是写作刚刚入门，又无法达到精通程度的学生最容易遇到的问题。英文写作的原则应该是“less is more”，写得精炼远远好于长篇大论，如若英文写作要从中低端迈入高端，这背后需要调动介词，比如“otherwise”这种介词，80%的学生都不会用，或者害怕用;此外把从句以合成词的方式的呈现出来，用上data-driven这样的结构，此处不一一赘述。
托福写作高分策略
1.词汇要求：按笔者对 托福写作 题认真分析和多次参加 托福考试 经验，我认为词汇的要求应该是4000—5000个积极词汇。其中，学习词汇三个重中之重便是：
①动宾搭配。 ②介宾搭配。 ③修饰原则。 此乃应对新托 福写作词汇要求之三大利器。
2.语法突破：其中必备四大语法结构即是：①句子结构 ②从句 ③非谓语动词 ④倒装、强调、平行结构、一致;
3.思路拓展：有的考生英语水平虽好，但常常苦于没有思路。那针对这种情况，我们对思路扩展提出两种方法，能迅速有效帮助学生解决这个问题。①归类法 + ②总括法
4.审题原则：如何审题，决定了你是否能在有效时间内迅速进入状态。对此，我们制定出审题三原则： ①定位 ②概括 ③分类
5.结构安排：清晰的结构将使阅卷人对你留下一个好的印象。除此，你也能更加有效的安排自己的段落。三种方法助你一臂之力：1平衡式 2 倾向式 3 一波三折式
篇12：托福综合写作介绍必看
托福综合写作介绍必看
托福综合写作要求考生能够将课堂、讲座内容与阅读教材和其他材料相结合来写作。在综合写作题型中，考生必须：对听到和看到的材料做笔记，在写作前利用笔记组织信息;准确地从原文材料中总结、释义和引用信息;写出听到的信息与读到的信息之间是如何联系的。
综合写作的话题会涉及到一下几方面：生物、生态，考古、历史，天文，艺术，教育，商业、经济，科技以及地质等等。准备综合写作，考生需通过大量阅读积累相关话题范畴的通识性背景知识。
同学们请注意，在综合写作部分，听力文中的内容是写作的绝对重点，但是阅读也绝对不能忽视。很多情况下，由于没有好好看阅读材料，导致听力有很多地方没听出来，或者逻辑没听懂。这些可以通过仔细阅读而有所改善的。
同学们在训练听力能力的同时，也要注意概括总结能力的培养。否则，你虽然听懂和记录了听力的内容，却无法准确地把听到的内容概括出来，也并不能在综合写作任务中取得好分数。
托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：为何参加危险运动?
托福写作难点话题一览
The attractions of dangerous activities
Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
写作思路展开结构分析
这道题目可能不太好展开，危险运动的定义可能很多同学都不是特别清楚，大家不妨按照极限运动来进行联想，就是那种对人身安全可能有危险性，非常规性质的运动项目，比如跳伞蹦极之类的运动。而这类运动能够吸引人参加，原因多半是体验刺激、金钱利益之类的因素，大家可以从这些点着手论述。
本话题高分范文赏析
People engage themselves in dangerous activities for various reasons, which probably includes money, pleasure, and perhaps ironically, nescience. Perhaps the most direct drive might come from money, which is needed for everyone, any time and everywhere. People have enough wit to balance their certain choices, especially when they fa danger and money. Those stunt men or women in Hollywood movies, photographers who shoot sharks or crocodiles, or those who participate in stock car racing, are always sophisticated enough calculate whether the outcome overweigh the risk. If they are willing to take the risk, they must have evaluated well. They know exactly the rule: the more risks they take, the more they might get. There also is another kind of people in this world. Money is of almost no importance to them They perform dangerous activities just for their own pleasure. Perhaps the most appropriate example involves sports. Actually every kind of sports is dangerous, and even can be deadly. Danger always exists, but people tend to simply ignore it. Take parachuting for example, who can refuse the fascination of flying in the sky like a bird? On the other hand, it seems that danger itself makes the activity so fascinating as too hard to refuse. To conquer is the very nature of human being from the very beginning. Pheidippides said seconds before dropping dead two thousand years ago, ”Rejoice,] we conquer!\" And it seems perfectly logical for some people that celebration follows conquer. Ironically, sometimes blind brave comes out of nescience. Sometimes people simply don't know the activity is hazardous or how perilous it exactly is. It can be exemplified by a recent incident. Five students (three of them have a master's degree) lost their lives in a mountaineering expedition. Those students reportedly didn't, and it seems highly probable, make an adequate preparation before expedition, which made the tragedy ineluctable. People always praise alpinists with words such as strong, brave, courageous, but in this case none of these words is appropriate Those young students traded their springtime with blind brave, and died in vain.
三大托福写作技巧集锦
第一种新托福写作技巧是用一个单词代替一组意义相同的单词，比如：
①用forget(忘记)代替do not remember(没有记住)
②用ignore(忽视)代替do not pay attention to(不注意)
③用now(现在)代替 at this point in time(此时此刻)
④用because(由于)代替due to the fact that(鉴于下列事实)
第二种新托福写作技巧是省略同义词或近义词。
比如在下面例句中，形容词important(重要的)和significant(有重要意义的)，就是两个同义词(也可以说是近义词)，我们可以省略important，只保留significant。
①The government project is important and significant.(这项政府计划是重要的，有重要意义。)
②The government project is significant.(这项政府计划有重要意义。)
第三种新托福写作技巧是在不改变句子含义的前提下，省略所有可以省略的单词。
比如在下面例句中，the cover of the book (书的封面)可以省略成the book cover，is red incolor(是红色的)可以省略成is red。
①The cover of the book is red in color.(书的封面是红色的)
②The book cover is red.(书的封面是红色的)
最后我们把这三种技巧结合起来，将一个冗长、绕嘴的句子，改写成一个简短、易懂的句子。
①University malls must be accessible and free from congestion in order that students, faculty andemployees may have unobstructed passage through those areas of the campus.(校内道路必须是便于通行的，不拥堵的，以便让学生、教师和职员能够无阻碍地通过，到达校园的各处。)
②University malls must be free enough from congestion to allow people to walk through easily.(校内道路不应当拥堵，以便人们顺利通行。)
篇13：托福写作十大类话题介绍
托福写作十大类话题介绍
1、托福写作教育类话题
教育类话题主要涉及到学生的一些基本情况，包括选课、就业、学校活动以及课下作业等很多方面。此外，学校的一些决策、设备变更、教师选择等也都有涉及。教育类话题在托福写作中的占比很高，在历年托福写作考试中大概占据25%左右的题目。
2、托福写作社会类话题
社会类话题涉及的范围很广，主要是指一些社会话题、事件以及观点类问题。例如：Do you agree or disagree that society benefits more from works of great artists than from political leaders.是否同意：艺术家比政治家对社会的贡献大。像这样的话题就属于社会类话题，考生在表达这类话题的时候，一定要注意不要涉及极端、信仰以及政治敏感类的问题。单从两个对象的角度出发即可。
3、托福写作生活方式类话题
生活方式类题目主要是指人们对于一些生活方式的选择，比如：在大城市好，还是在小城市居住比较好。包括居住地点、生活态度、生活方式选择以及生活和工作的权衡等。对于这类题目往往是二选一的问题，考生可以选择自己支持的一方，当然也可以兼顾两者。
4、托福写作人物类话题
人物类话题，主要指个体的任务特性、性格以及和人物相关的一些特点。例如：一个领导要有承认错误的勇气。人物类话题需要注意的是，在描述人物特性的时候要站在客观的角度，不要过多参杂个人主见，还要从群体角度出发，而不是个人。
5、托福写作工作类话题
工作类话题涉及到的面比较单一，一般是和工作相关的工作压力、工作机会、工作能力以及工作地点选择等。其中，“工作能力提升”是一个人在工作中得到的进步和收获;“压力”是现在工作者在工作中共同承受的问题。这两个也是考察率比较高的话题。
6、托福写作成功类话题
成功类话题一般考查成功的要素，就是怎样才能够成功。成功类话题常常涉及的关键字有机会、教育或知识、创造力、效率、能力等。其中，机会、创造力以及效率三方面在托福写作中出现的概率最高。
7、托福写作环境类话题
由于近年来环境恶化，这类话题出现的概率也在攀高。说到环境，我们就会想到诸如环境保护、节约、环境治理、环境保护以及节约等相关的话题。针对环境类问题，考生一定要引起注意，从而能够更好地完成托福写作的任务。
8、托福写作交通类话题
交通类话题主要考查交通安全、交通工具发展以及交通规则等三个方面。其中，“安全”问题在交通类出现的比重大概会占据50%左右，需要考生格外注意。
9、托福写作科技类话题
说到“科技”，我们可能会想到现在日益发展的手机、电脑以及各种各样新出现的科技产品等。这些科技产品使得我们的生活变得更加便利，高效。所以，我们就针对科技发展的优势，来分析一下科技类话题。
10、托福写作媒体类话题
媒体类话题涉及“电视，广播，电脑，手机”对于我们生活的影响。提到这些媒体，我们就能够联想到媒体对现在生活带来的影响和变化。而“效率”和“健康”是和媒体类分不开的两个写作思路。
托福写作思路解析：政府的首要任务
新托福写作题目：政府的首要任务
1.During economic crisis, the government tries to reduce money in certain public service area Which one do you think the government should spend less money into?
Education; (2) Health Care; (3) Support for Unemployed
新托福写作思路解析：政府的首要任务
3选1题目，选择少投资到失业者
1.
论点：投资教育对于政府来说是首要任务之一。
解释：教育质量的高低决定了这个国家年轻一代是否能够有较高的文化水以及是否能够培养足够多样化的能力。
引出：从无数政府大力投资教育就能看出来投资教育的重要性。
分析：美国政府最近几年一直在进行教育方面的改革，大力的提升基础教育以及高等教育的教学质量以及水平。为了培养足够多的人才，以及让更多的孩子受到大学教育，更多的社区大学被建立，并且给予社区大学的学生很多的机会去college 和 university上学。除此之外，中小学的基础设施建设也被政府所重视，为了让学生能够更好的提升他们的学习效率，绝大部分学校都会配备设备齐全的实验室，以及藏书很多的图书馆。
结论：因此从美国政府对于教育的重视就能看投资教育的重要性。
2.
论点：健康对于普通市民来说是最重要的，表明了政府对于不断提升医疗技术的重视的必要性。
解释：医疗技术的发展能够决定是否人们能够保持健康的身体状态，而这也是社会发展的前提条件，因为没有健康的普通个体，社会的各个行业的发展不可能得到保障。例子：近10年左右，各种大范围突发性传染疾病的出现使得人们的身体健康时刻处于威胁之下，从2003年席卷中国的SARS，到几年先后出现的禽流感，还有近两年出现的埃博拉病毒。如果医疗技术没有在进步，那么很可能整个人类都会处于巨大的威胁之下。除了这些突发性疾病，现在人们从小注射的各种疫苗也正是医疗技术不断进步的成果。
结论：因此可以看出医疗技术的进步关乎人们的身体健康，需要被政府重视。
3.
让步段：
诚然帮助那些失业的人也很重要。
失业的人无法得到稳定的经济收入，会直接影响他们的生活。
然而，政府如果投资教育，能够很大程度的减少失业人的数量，而且那些失业的人也可以通过使用政府所投资的教育系统，去上培训学校，去提升自己的能力，使得自己能够重新就业。因此在这三者中，政府更应重视教育和医疗。
托福写作思路解析：专卖店和大商场
新托福写作题目：专卖店和大商场
it is always better to purchase in large stores than in several small shops that specialize in different items
新托福写作思路解析：专卖店和大商场
专卖店买：
更有效率-大商场东西太多，人们每次回花很多时间挑选，甚至忘记自己要买什么，造成不必要的消费。而专卖店只提供某些类别的商品，很有针对性。所以不会造成时间的浪费-例如我选择球鞋的时候，我每次去耐克店直接找科比系列的球鞋，所以每次购物的时间非常短，我只需要选择球鞋的尺码和颜色就ok了。当我选择购买衣服的时候，一般我就去阿迪店，因为颜色比较好看，款式比较新颖。因此我个人例子就能够看出专卖店的好处。
服务质量-大商场服务质量差，因为他们觉得客户多。而专卖店的服务质量很高。- 例如苹果店，服务态度超好，也很专业，无论何时进去都有人立即过来提供服务。例如我上次手机出了一些问题，刚进专卖店，就有技术人员询问我出了问题，并且立即给我的机器进行检测，然后发现是因为系统出现了漏洞，然后帮我充装了系统，手机就好了，解决问题的过程中也一直指导我怎么去用一些功能。所以我感觉到很温暖。
托福作文精彩句型赏析：一个句子掌握5条短语
This need for immediacy is reflected in younger news consumers’ choice of media: they overwhelmingly prefer to get their news from television and the Internet.
这句话的逻辑结构是： This need for… is reflected in A:
B 对…的需求体现在A上：B (B是对A的具体解释)，属于因果逻辑。
我们在写作中，要多学会用具体的事例、细节来表达我们的观点，这样才更有说服力。
这句话值得我们学习的地方很多，单词虽然简单，但是短语却很地道。
1)对…的需求 need for…
2) 体现在… is reflected in…
3) 某人…的选择 one’s choice of sth
4)非常喜欢… overwhelmingly prefer to…
5 )从…获得新闻 get news from…
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