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篇1：关于雅思写作你要注意的几个点
No.1开头段使用模板太多
考官对模板深恶痛绝的程度可能超过很多考生的想象，而且，如果考生在第一段还使用大量恶俗的模板，还在第一句说with the development of society，那他会发现他的成绩单上的作文得分会在4分左右。
其实，翻翻雅思考官的范文，我们会发现，考官在第一段只干了两件事情：引出背景+表明观点，甚至很多考官只干了第一件事情(引出背景)，仅此而已。但是，考官的首段会很具体，会和文章特定场合挂钩
No2 不会使用四段论等于慢性自杀
很多考生对四段论的框架貌似了解，一谈起作文段落安排就会滔滔不绝：第一段引出主题，第二段陈述支持的理由，第三段陈述反对的理由，最后一段总结。
这其实是一个非常害人、没有任何说服力的段落安排，如果翻开剑桥雅思考官给出的满分范文，几乎每篇文章都在告诉我们这样一个真实有用的段落安排：第一段引出主题及拓展+ 第二段反面论证及支持理由+ 第三段对方观点及驳论+ 第四段总结及补充说明。
而且，段落之间的巧妙衔接也增强了文章的论证能力。建议考生多多研读考官范文，真的能看出门道出来，而不是沉浸在自己似是而非的理解里。
No.3 作文还要加标题
英语考试有一个国际惯例(common practice)：写作文时不需要加标题，直接写正文就行。
加标题属于浪费感情，浪费表情。而且，这个标题可能太大，一篇250字的文章不能承担标题之重;这个标题可能太小，只照顾到你这篇文章的一小部分;这个标题可能加错了，意思与文章相反，反而会误导考官。
总之，不需要加任何标题。
No.4 留给大作文的时间太短
考官明确提出，Task 2 carries more weights(大作文占的分量要比小作文大)，而且考官在改作文的时候确实以大作文为主。但是考生在考试的时候，小作文控制不住时间，写得过于详细，最后留给大作文的时间只有半个小时不到，这样做就死定了。
所以，我们建议小作文的时间控制在20分钟以内，超过20分钟没写完也不要再写了，而写大作文的时间一定要大于等于40分钟。
No.5 从来不知道“驳论”为何物?
如果你还不知道雅思作文要写“驳论”，那你就真“后知后觉”了。中国学生经常忽略了这个强大的论证段落，而考官经常在他们的范文里使用这个武器(具体请见剑5的P165，剑6的P164，剑7的P173)。
其实，这个强大的武器很好操作，第一步：先把对方主张的观点，或者是对方对我的批评摆出来，加一个简单的理由(这很好找吧);第二步：加一个转折，通常会说“但是，他们太简单化了”;第三步：先写一个in fact，再写我针锋相对的观点，或驳斥对方的观点。这样就轻松搞定了一个段落。建议大家回头研究一下这个强大的武器，用正确了可以增分不少。
No.6 尾段开始描绘蓝图
中国学生喜欢在最后一段发出感慨，呼吁各方携手为美好的明天努力。
这种结尾写法已经被考官唾弃久矣，因为在他们看来，大作文的尾段只需要满足三点：
1)重申总论点;2)针对对立面的让步;3)重申一个或两个主要分论点。
大家写到最后一段，不要再发挥了，赶紧收住就OK了。
雅思小作文写作的注意事项
1. For the writing task 1 introduction, can I copy words from the chart?
对于雅思写作小作文的开头段，我能抄图表中的单词吗?
Yes, try not to use too many words from the question, but it's a good idea to take a few words from the graph/chart itself. The labels on the chart can help you to paraphrase the question statement.
答：是的可以，尽量别用太多题目中的单词，但是使用图表中的词汇是个好方法。图表中的标签可以帮你复述题目。
2. For process diagrams, can we suggest ways of improving the process?
对于流程图，我们可以给出一些改善流程的建议吗?
No, you should never include opinions or suggestions in your task 1 essay. Just describe what you see.
答：不，你不能在Task 1小作文中包含任何意见或者建议。只能描述图表中所能看到的内容。
3. Can I use “illustrates”, “indicates” or “mentions” instead of “shows”?
我能用“illustrates”, “indicates” 或“mentions”来代替“shows”吗?
I tell my students to use “shows”, “illustrates”, “compares” or “gives information about”. You don't need to learn any more ways. I wouldn't use “indicates” or “mentions” because they're not quite right for the context.
答：我跟我的学生说，你只用“shows”, “illustrates”, “compares” 或“gives information about”就够了，不必学那么多的表达。我不会使用“indicates” 或“mentions”，因为它们用在小作文中不合适。
以上就是雅思写作有哪些注意事项的全部内容。
篇2：盘点雅思写作大作文中要注意的点
雅思大作文的写作方法及注意事项
语句、词语。文章由语句组成，语句由词语组成。在着手写文章之前，应该提示自己留意下面几点
1)语句与词语的正确用法。这是最基本的一点。这儿包含单字的正确拼写、词语在特定语句中的正确应用、正确的语句模式。留意：千万不要在文章中呈现中国式的英语。这就要求在构思的时分不要用中文进行考虑，写的时分要细心酌量文章的语句。
2)语句的多样化。这点的完成必须在语句与词语的正确上来完成。语句的多样化是表现一个人英语言语水平的要害也是使文章获得高分的重点。如非谓语从句、定语从句、宾语从句等，以及简单句、杂乱句的归纳运用。
3)标点的正确运用
文章的全体风格与气氛。
作为考官或许是阅读你文章的人，在第一次接触到你文章时就能够感受到文章的特色与风格，或许生动或许呆板，而根据模板写的文章很难做到生动或许是吸引读者。
坚持书写的整齐性与笔迹
常见过错提示
一. 纷歧致(disagreements)
所谓纷歧致不光指主谓纷歧致，它还包含了数的纷歧致 时态纷歧致及代词纷歧 致等.
例1. when one have money ,he can do what he want to .
(人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么.)
分析：one是单数第三人称，因此本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓纷歧致.
改为： once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)
二. 修饰语错位(misplaced modifiers)
英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于语句不同的方位，语句的意义可能引起改变.关于这一点中国学生往往没有引起满足的重视，因此造成了不必要的误解. 例1. i believe i can do it well and i will better know the world outside the campus.
分析：better方位不妥，应置于句末.
三. 语句不完好(sentence fragments)
在白话中，外交双方可凭借手势口气上下文等，不完好的语句完全能够被了解.可是书面语就不同了，语句结构不完好会令意思表达不清，这种状况常常发作在主句写完今后，笔者又想加些弥补阐明时发作.
例1. there are many ways to know the society. for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
分析：本句后半部分“for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完好的语句，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句.
改为：there are many ways to know society ,for example ,by tv ,radio ,and newspaper.
四. 悬垂修饰语(dangling modifiers)
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后边语句的逻辑关系紊乱不清.例如：at the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中”at the age of ten“只点出十岁时，但没有阐明” 谁”十岁时.按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 假如咱们把这个悬垂修饰语改清晰一点，全句就不那么费解了.
改为：
when i was ten, my grandfather died.
例1. to do well in college, good grades are essential.
分析：句中不定式短语 “to do well in college” 的逻辑主语不清楚.
改为：
to do well in college, a student needs good grades.
五. 词性误用(misuse of parts of speech)
“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等.
例1. none can negative the importance of money.
分析：negative 系形容词，误作动词。
改为：
none can deny the importance of money.
六. 指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns)
指代不清首要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或许先后所用的代词纷歧致。试看下面这一句：
mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
(玛丽和我姐姐很要好，由于她要她做她的伴娘。)
读完上面这一句话，读者无法清晰地判别两位姑娘中谁将成婚，谁将当伴娘。假如咱们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以清晰，意思就一望而知了。这个语句可改为：
mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
例1. and we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
分析：句中人称代词we 和反身代词yourself指代纷歧致。改为：
we can also know society by serving it ourselves.
七. 不间断语句(run-on sentences)
什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。
例1. there are many ways we get to know the outside world.
分析：这个语句包含了两层完好的意思：“there are many ways.” 以及“we get to know the outside world.”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
改为：
there are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或：
there are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside
world
八. 措词缺点(troubles in diction)
diction 是指在特定的语句中怎么适当地选用词语的问题，囿于教育时刻急迫，教师平常在这方面花的时刻往往极端有限，影响了学生在写作中没有养成杰出的琢磨，酌量的习气。他们往往为所欲为，拿来就用。所以作文中用词不妥的过错举目皆是。
例1. the increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
(农业方面化学物质运用的不断添加也造成了污染。)
分析：明显，考生把obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物”误作substance“物质”了。别的“the increasing use (不断添加的运用)” 应改为“abusive use (乱用)”。
改为：
the abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
九. 负担(redundancy)
言以简练为贵。写语句没有一个剩余的词;写阶段没有一个无必要的语句。能用单词的不必词组;能用词组的不必从句或语句。如：
in spite of the fact that he is lazy, i like him.
本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句，咱们按照上述“能用词组的不必从句”能够改为：in spite of his laziness, i like him.
例1. for the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
分析：整个语句能够大大简化。
改为：
diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
十. 不连贯(incoherence)
不连贯是指一个语句前言不对后语，或是结构上不疏通。这也是考生常犯的缺点。
例1. the fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
分析：the fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。it 与things 在数方面纷歧致。
常见联词
表层进
first, firstly to begin with/second, secondly to start with/third, thirdly what's more/also and then/and equally important/besides in addition/further in the first place/still furthermore
last but not the least/next besides/too moreover/finally
表举例
for example for instance/to illustrate as an illustration/after all/表解说/as a matter of fact/frankly speaking/in this case namely/in other words
表总结
in summary in a word/in brief in conclusion/to conclude in fact/indeed in short/in other words /of course/it is true specially/namely in all/that is to summarize/thus as has been said/altogether in other words/finally in simpler terms/in particular that is/on the whole to put it differently/therefore
表着重
of course indeed/above all most important/emphasis certainly in fact
表退让
still nevertheless/in spite of all the same/even so after all/concession granted naturally/of course
表比较
in comparison likewise/similarly equally/however likewise/in the same way/
表转机
by contrast although/e same time but/in contrast nevertheless/notwithstanding on the contrary
on the other hand otherwise/regardless still/though yet/despite the fact that even so/even though for all that/however in spite of/instead
表时刻
after a while afterward/again also/and then as long as/at last at length/at that time before/besides earlier/eventually finally/formerly further/furthermore in addition/in the first place in the past/
last lately/meanwhile moreover/next now/presently second/shortly simultaneously/since so far/soon still/subsequently then/thereafter too/until until now/when
雅思写作五大必知注意事项
1.注意把握时间
雅思写作要求考生在一个小时之内完成一篇至少150个单词的说明文或信件(20分钟)和一篇至少250个单词的议论文(40分钟)。考生需合理安排时间。小站教育建议大家先简后难，先做Task 1，并且Task 1尽量控制在20分钟内完成，然后再写Task 2。所以考生在考前一定要多练多写，掌握时间。
2.注意把控字数
虽然雅思写作考试，对于作文字数没有上限要求，但有下限要求。首先，同学们的注意字数不能过少，但同时也要注意字数不要过多。据统计看来，大多数的高分小作文字数都在180左右，而大作文也在280左右。就Task 1 而言，说明该考生对图表的分析能力还有待提高，多练习看图审题构思。如果Task 2字数不够，说明同学们思路不开阔，论据无法扩展，考生需增加阅读量，多看和雅思写作话题相近的文章和精读雅思范文来掌握论据扩展方法。
3.注意格式及卷面整洁
首先同学们要明白，雅思大小作文是不需要题目。雅思写作有两种格式：一是空行不空格式，即文章每段开头顶格写，段与段之间空一行;二是空格不空行，即除首段顶格外，文章每段开头空五个字符，段与段之间不空行。事实证明，潦草的字迹和不整洁的卷面将在一定程度上影响考官理解文章内容，从而影响得分。因此大家在写作过程中，注意保持卷面整洁。
4.注意时态
在雅思小作文中，经常会出现图标类的作文。图表作文通常会给出特定的时间，同学们要根据此时间决定文章的时态。通常情况下有以下三种情况：过去时间用一般过去式，现在时间或没给出时间用一般现在式，预测用一般将来式。议论文根据内容确定时态。
5.注意灵活运用机经及模板
雅思考试是一种非常系统、严格、专业的语言水平测试。有着庞大的题库，有些题目也会重复出现，所以同学们可以通过了解以往考题，即机经充分把握写作题型、话题等，为考试做好充分准备。背范文对提高同学们的语言水平有很大帮助，但大家要明确背范文的目的是吸收其中的精华，如观点、语言、结构等，而不是在考试时遇到相同题目全盘照搬。一旦被考官发现，可想而知最后的得分就不会高。
雅思大作文注意事项
一、雅思大作文开头：
开头要短小;要有立场和观点;避免模板。
如：Should the amount of advertising on TV be increased or decreased?
Nowadays many people discuss whether we need …or not.
Now whether…. has become a very hot debate in society.
As far as this topic is concerned, different people have different opinions. Some people think that ……Others believe that …... I think both views have their reasons.
Recently the ... has been brought into focus ... Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible. In this essay, I aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures.
二、雅思大作文结构：
一个paragraph一个idea;避免过多examples, esp personal examples.;段落间的平衡
三、雅思大作文语言：
避免idioms, famous sayings
避免poetic language
Explain your point…then explain it again in a different way
Use “a mix of longer and short sentences”
雅思大作文评分标准
考官将从以下方面对作文进行评分：
1.对写作任务的反应：考生能否完整地、以恰当的方式完成题目中提出的写作任务;考生的论点是否切中题目的要求、论证过程是否完整、论点是否得到了论据的支持;考生的观点是否清晰和有效;
2.连贯性和结构层次：考生能否将信息和要点进行组织(如运用分段的能力)、信息和要点之间的联系是否清晰;
3.词汇来源：考生使用的词汇是否广泛、准确、且适合这一部分写作的要求;
4.语法的多样性和准确性：考生使用的语法结构是否多样、准确、且适合这一部分写作的要求。
篇3：雅思写作要注意些什么
Dear John and Jane,
I hope this letter finds you well. I’m just writing to thank you both for the holiday and for the photos you sent.
The photos arrived this morning in the post. They reminded me what a great time I had during my stay with you last month. You really were fantastic hosts, and I couldn’t have asked for better guides to show me around.
Sorry I didn’t write to you earlier, but I’ve been working flat out since the moment I arrived home. Do you remember I told you I had an assignment to finish? Well, the deadline was two weeks earlier than I thought it was!
Anyway, I’m back to normal now and I’ve handed in all of my assignments. In fact, now that I’m free, why don’t you both come and stay? There’s a spare room here, so you’re welcome to use it whenever you like.
Hope to see you soon,
Peter
雅思G类写作考官范文：写给商店经理的投诉信
One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business. Write a letter to reply to your friend's offer. In your letter
give your opinion of your friend's business idea
tell him whether or not you have decided to accept his offer
and explain your reasons for this decision.
篇4：雅思写作要注意些什么
Dear John,
I hope you're well. Thanks for giving me some time to think about your business proposal.
First, let me just say that I think it would be a great idea to open a café on the high street.It definitely makes sense since there are no other cafés in the area.
Having said that, I'm afraid I'm going to have to turn your offer down. I've thought long and hard about this decision, and I just dont think it's the right time for me to get involved with a big project like this.
To be honest, I would struggle to find enough money to cover my share of the initial investment costs. Also, I don't really want to leave my current job, and I think it would be impossible for me to commit to
the café project while I'm still working full-time.
Best of luck with the café. I'm sure you'll make a success of it without me!
Speak soon
篇5：线上面试你要注意的几个点
线上面试你要注意的几个点
第一、在家进行模拟对话面试。
模拟对话面试可以帮助自己梳理思路，看自己在面试是中会遇到哪些问题，有没有全面地了解公司信息，岗位职责要求，自己有哪些能力可 以匹配这个岗位。
这个过程可以帮助自己查漏补缺，对即将到来的面试做补充和调整。认真梳理自己的工作经验，分析自己的优劣势，以及职业规划，能让自 己有一个更清醒的认识。
机会是留给那些准备给面试官留下深刻印象的人绝对必要的，以给面试官留下深刻印象并提前写作。
其次，创造一个适宜的环境面试的领先地位。
尽量不要进行选择在卧室视频，如果通过镜头有脏乱的衣服，乱摆放的物品，梳妆台，会严重社会影响企业面试研究结果的。而且我们还给面试官不专业的形象，没有人会愿意应聘一个连自己学习生活都处理能力不好工作的人。
选择一个简单而有序的背景，你可以客厅，书房，呈现出项目的镜头是整洁有序，而背景不能太花哨，幼稚，但不能选择的衣服挂在阳台上。
第三，要注意自己的形象，保持良好的精神面貌。
一般来说都是可以提前收到面试通知，虽然我们在家面试，但依然要把学生自己学习当成是去公司发展一样，衣着整洁，最好展现出自己的职业感。
如果你是穿着睡衣或穿着休闲的家庭服装面试，结果是可想而知的。 线上面试成本较小，但干扰因素较多，且竞争比较大，与线下面试不同，可以深入接触，交谈，相互了解，如果要获得这份工作机会，一定要注意任何细节..
第四、面试时保持专注，且表情柔和，面带微笑。
线上面试的时候可以保持自己一个比较安静的环境，这样我们才能更加专注于面试，但家里面试不像在办公室那样，任何社会问题都只能凭之前的积累学生回答这个问题，可能你手边有很多企业面试资料，或者面试管理过程中，你浏览网页上的信息。
但请记住，即使你手头有很多面试材料，或者你正在网上寻找答案，也不要让面试官找出你想做什么。 你需要非常专注和专注。 如果你能微笑和互动，那是最好的。
互动，加深人民之间的联系，面试官你一次机会记住。
第五、语速不要太快，吐字清晰且干练。
如果你是坐在电脑前面试，一定要乖乖的，不要抖脚，不要东倒西歪，背挺直，做好，才能让自己的表达更清晰。
如果你平常说话喜欢带哦，啊，嗯，这个，那个，等语气词，尽量克制，这会让自己的表现非常掉价，不专业。
研究表明，一个人的语言模式会影响人们对他们的看法，包括评估他们的能力和是否适合这份工作。
如果在面试中，你语无伦次，语速、语调太快或太慢，都将影响你的正常发挥。
我们公司好几个小伙伴都是通过在线面试应聘成功的，所以调整好心态，提前就做好准备，就能从容地应对了。
最后，面试的时候不要太紧张，你就当成去公司面试一样，展现自己应有的水平和能力，祝你在疫情期间也能找到满意的工作。
这5个坑千万注意绝对不能跳
1、交朋友
小编这里说的交朋友，并不是说我们不能交朋友，而是不能和同事交朋友，当你真心把同事当成好朋友之后，一定会交心的说一些该说不该说的话，慢慢你就有把柄落在人家手里面了，到时候说不准在领导的利益诱惑下你就会被他出卖。所以，千万注意。
2、抬杠
最为一个职场新人，有很多人都是天不怕地不怕，有些时候直接敢顶撞领导，这种事情做出来之后，你还能在这里好好的待下去?
3、没有反馈
事实上，大多数领导者想听到的是手底下的员工在做的事情，或之后给予更多的反馈，从时间导致我们的时间来满足的过程，甚至有些企业每天都会直接去开会的目的，这里边，不是今天，事情并没有想知道该怎么办，是否改进的方法，以及你打算怎样做的，所以，实际上，领导者需要的是您的反馈意见。
4、吐槽
吐槽公司，吐槽同事，吐槽领导的各种事，吐槽这个事其实是我们所有人都喜欢自己做的事，有的时候你会感觉企业领导真有病，明明这事情这么做不会有一个结果但却偏偏还要通过这样做，真的搞不懂。有时可能会私下默默吐槽，不过万一被当事人知道，那你就很尴尬了。
5、只发展人脉，不注重能力
每个人都有自己的人脉圈子，这个人脉圈子一般都会和自己所从事的行业有关，当然里边不仅仅是和行业有关的人，有时候你过于注重与他们的关系，而不注重自己的提升，他们越走越远、越走越高，当你自己的能力跟不上的话，也只会离他们越来越远。
希望职场的新人们小心注意那些“坑”，不要让自己掉进去出不来。
职场上你最讨厌的人有哪些
一、负面情绪爆发：坏情绪每个人都有。学会控制不好的心情，而不是四处散布。也许你会说：不能倾吐不开心啊，这样的情绪不能自己消化!但是每一次你像垃圾一样倾泻而出，并不会让别人认同，反而让别人害怕、疏远，不喜欢接近你。消极情绪的根源往往是自己，每一件事发生在不同的人眼中，有不同的判断、不同的认知、不同的标签。不要让你的情绪影响你的判断力，影响你的人际关系。
二、职场的不专业：我们这里指的不是你在处理技术问题时不专业。你处理这些事情的能力将因你的经验不断增加而改变。专业精神也将慢慢培养。工作场所的不专业是指在社会工作生活环境中过于扮可爱。办公环境中各种卡通玩偶;服装文化始终保持着这一时期女孩的风格，粉嫩、可爱、钻石闪闪;电子邮件签名附有猫咪萌照…
三、喜欢搬弄是非：搬弄是非的人别有用心的把秘密藏在心里。这些人喜欢贬低别人，以激发自己的卓越。或者让职场对手陷入麻烦，失去领导和同事的信任。他们所说的话往往是对一件事的猜测和想象的结果。如果有人悄悄靠近你，并贴着你的耳朵，”我听说...”你必须特别注意!
四、不主动沟通：当有问题时，不想沟通或不敢表达，一直保持沉默。事实上，工作中难免会遇到困难和问题。如果找不到解决方案，应该尽快找到寻求指导和协作的领导小组。毕竟，多人的力量是强大的。
五、不知道感恩：职场上的同事们希望能够遇到自己的伯乐，并拥有欣赏和认可自己的人。可以帮助你做出很大的改变，走向成功;你也会遇到“小人”，他会并利用你帮助她在工作中发展和成长，她的事业成功时，你被无情的压迫和羞辱。让你感到遗憾的是，善意错付了对象。
六、抛开责任，责怪其他同事：很明显，自己的工作中存在错误和问题。当别人第一时间想要弥补的时候，总会有一种人总是第一时间跑到领导面前逃避他们的责任，甚至胡说八道，使领导们觉得他们都是忠诚的，可以成为领导了解下属工作情况的卧底。目的是找到一个能为自己承担责任的冤大头。
在工作生活中，每个人都有自己的优点和缺点。只要我们不用有色眼镜去看别人，用别人的长处来弥补自己的缺点，你学到的就越多。远离工作场所的垃圾人，用一双眼睛区分对与错，妥善处理工作中的人际关系。
篇6：雅思写作小作文应该注意哪些点
雅思写作小作文应该注意哪些点
No.1 趋势描写就是increase和decrease以及leveloff
同学们在描写趋势的上升或下降的时候常常只用到了一个increase&decrease+副词的模式。殊不知对上升下降的描写我们可以采取至少三种的描写方式动词+副词，形容词+名词以及把上升下降的词换做形容词来使用。这也就正好避免了评分标准四GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy(语法范围与精确)中的陷阱。
No.2 有多少种属性分多少段，有多少图分多少段
关于information的organizing和paragraphing也是一个很重要的得分参照点。剑4TEST3中是一张技工，本科，学士，研究生，硕士以及博士的男女数量分布图。很多同学在中间描述段的时候将其按照学位的排列顺序分成了六段来写，这又让你的内容变得复杂和臃肿了!为何不按照性别来分段呢?只需要两段就可以将图表内容梳理清楚。所以建议大家在动笔之前首先在自己的头脑中有一个最为清晰和直观明了的分段。
No.3 Ending总结段可有可无，可加主观观点
在最后的结尾段，建议考生为求文章结构板块的完整性，起到首尾呼应的作用，用1-2句话重申图表突出特征，总结图表反映的现象，揭示其规律和本质。切忌添加主观观点!图表没有反映的信息，绝对不写，也不要随意乱猜!
No.4 分析图表背后的原因
这是中国学生的习惯性毛病，写作文时候总喜欢写上为什么。雅思小作文是客观性写作，只要求通过图表描述和总结，不能写上为什么，不需要解释。参照剑5TEST1中曲线图，日本在2030年左右65岁人口数量预计要陡增，但我们只要求写出事实，不要求写出陡增的原因!
No.5 连接词我用了，句子之间的连接也有了，文章完成没问题了
在评分标准第二点中明确提到了CoherenceandCohesion(连贯与衔接)，可见是一个相当重要的得分参考点。而很多中国学生的作文中充满了then，after，before等这样单调的低级连接词，最后的得分自然不会上去。合理的使用一些从句，关联词会使你的句子看起来更加精炼和有创意。
雅思大作文模板之纸质书已经out了?
Along with popularization of the Internet, storage and sharing of information have come to exist in various forms. Some people believe that printed books will still play a considerably significant role. After serious consideration, I am convinced that the importance of printed books will be tremendously undermined, in view of their costs and the emergence of electronic books.
To begin with, printed books will be gradually replaced due to their relatively expensive costs. Conspicuously, the decreasing utilization of printed books is ascribed to their operational costs and destruction to surroundings. For example, publishing a book requires investment of a mass of manpower, material resources and financial resources. Besides，production of printed books also means consumption of vast amounts of wood, which can reduce the size of forests even further. Finally, the pollutants coming from book production can contaminate the quality of water and atmosphere. Hence, those negative consequences printed books may have an unpleasant impact on printed books themselves.
The appearance of electronic books renders lower demands of printed books. Conspicuously, features of electronic books include low-priced and environmentally-friendly, making them become the future of books. For instance, in comparison with traditional book forms, e-books popularized by the Internet are easier to carry, rich in content and real-time updated. Thus, e-books can win more popularity from youngsters and become a first choice for most of the readers.
Admittedly, printed books still play a crucial role. For example, a majority of school textbooks are printed, which is like a guarantee of correctness and completeness of knowledge; e-books on the other hand can be inaccessible due to network problems and computer viruses. However, e-books are bound to be predominant, in view of the increasingly popularized Internet, continuous innovation of technology and sound progress of the environment.
In brief, the relatively high costs of printed books and eco-friendly, portable and two-bit electronic books will certainly hinder the role and function of printed books.
雅思写作开头段这样写不可以
开头一：中式英文，人见人晕
典型失败案例：
Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life.
In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.
开头二：废话连篇不知所云
典型失败案例：
Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
修改方案：开门见山，直奔主题
In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.
Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)
Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.
Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!
开头三：观点模糊，态度暧昧
典型失败案例：
Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
开头四：偏离主题，无轨电车
典型失败案例：
Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.
开头五：语法错误，惨不忍睹
典型失败案例：
Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题)
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.
开头六：过分简单，没有重点
典型失败案例：
Topic-The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!
开头七：用词不当，表达不准
典型失败案例：
Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.
开头八：意思重复，原地踏步
典型失败案例：
Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.
开头九： 观点武断，态度强硬
典型失败案例：
Topic1-The importance of confidence
In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.
Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem
I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.
开头十：中国俗语，胡乱翻译
典型失败案例：
Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?
I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……
正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children
Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?
We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……
Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?
Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole…
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.
雅思作文中高频使用的句型
Sample Question: Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in
the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than
understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
雅思写作题目：有观点认为国际旅行作为世界上最大产业，它所带来的矛盾比人们了解不同文化更大，你是否同意这种观点?
头脑风暴可述理由 Brainstorming:
For--
1. It is necessary to develop the tourist trade, for it contributes a lot
to increasing understanding between nations.有必要发展旅游产业促进不同国家了解。
2.As the saying goes, “ Seeing is believing.” Only a trip to an unfamiliar
land can help us understand the people and culture there.只有一次旅行不能够使人了解文化和人民
3.Since tourism helps increase understanding between people, it will
finally wipe out prejudice against other nations, and make the world a more
peaceful one.旅游增加不同人了解，利于消除偏见促进和平
4.Tourism contributes significantly to marry countries’ GNP( Gross National
Product). The economy of some nations is based on the tourist
industry.旅游显著促进GNP,很多国家依附于旅游业
5.Tourism helps develop a nation’s commerce because tourists are most
likely to buy souvenirs wherever they go.旅游促进国家经济因为旅行者走到哪买到哪
6.Tourism helps accelerate a city’s construction and its embellishment.
7.Contact with tourists from afar widens the horizon of the local
people.
8.Tourism provides jobs for many people and helps solve or ease the social
problem of unemployment.
9.The tourist trade gives people a chance to enjoy the beautiful scenery of
the world and the wonders of mankind.
10. Tourism will help people learn about different cultures of the
world....
篇7：雅思写作上6的四个点
Write about the following topic:
In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Model Answer:
It has recently been suggested that the way children eat and live nowadays has led to deterioration in their health. I entirely agree with this view, and believe that this alarming situation has come about for several reasons.
To begin with, there is the worrying increase in the amount of processed food that children are eating at home, with little or none of the fresh fruit and vegetables that earlier generations ate every day. Secondly, more and more young people are choosing to eat in fast-food restaurants, which may be harmless occasionally, but not every day. What they eat there is extremely high in fat, salt and sugar, all of which can be damaging to their health.
There is also a disturbing decline in the amount of exercise they get. Schools have become obsessed with exams, with the shocking result that some pupils now do no sports at all. To make matters worse, few even get any exercise on the way to and from school, as most of them go in their parents’ cars rather than walk or cycle. Finally, children are spending far more time at home, playing computer games, watching TV or surfing the Internet. They no longer play outside with friends or take part in challenging outdoor activities.
To sum up, although none of these changes could, on its own, have caused widespread harm to children’s health, there can be little doubt that all of them together have had a devastating effect. This, in my opinion, can only be reversed by encouraging children to return to move traditional ways of eating and living.
篇8：雅思写作上6的四个点
Write about the following topic:
If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change?
Model Answer:
If I could change one thing about my hometown, I think it would be the fact that there’s no sense of community here. People don’t feel connected, they don’t look out for each other, and they don’t get to know their neighbors.
People come and go a lot here. They change jobs frequently and move on. This means that they don’t put down roots in the community. They don’t join community organizations and they’re not willing to get involved in trying to improve the quality of life. If someone has a petition to put in a new street light, she has a very hard time getting a lot of people to sign. They don’t feel it has anything to do with them. They don’t get involved in improving the schools because they don’t think the quality of education is important to their lives. They don’t see the connection between themselves and the rest of their community.
People don’t try to support others around them. They don’t keep a friendly eye on their children, or check in on older folks if they don’t see them for a few days. They’re not aware when people around them may be going through a hard time. For example, they may not know if a neighbor loses a loved one. There’s not a lot of community support for individuals.
Neighbors don’t get to know each other. Again, this is because people come and go within a few years. So when neighbors go on vacation, no one is keeping an eye on their house. No one is making sure nothing suspicious is going on there, like lights in the middle of the night. When neighbors’ children are cutting across someone’s lawn on their bikes, there’s no friendly way of casually mentioning the problem. People immediately act as if it’s a major property disagreement.
My hometown is a nice place to live in many ways, but it would be much nice if we had that sense of community.
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