高考备考写作:图表分析作文

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这次小编在这里给大家整理了高考备考写作:图表分析作文,本文共10篇,供大家阅读参考。本文原稿由网友“三杯上马去”提供。

篇1:考研英语二图表作文写作分析

考研英语二图表作文写作分析

对于英语(二)的考生来说,大作文备考的重点是图表作文,因为大纲样题中给出的是表格,而且两年真题考的是柱状图,都属于图表范畴。这里温馨提示广大考生,在复习这部分的时候,一定要有所侧重,做到心中有数。图表作文一般包括三个部分,第一段是描述图表,第二段是解释图表,最后一段是针对图表发表自己的看法或根据图表对图表里所暗含的趋势进行预测。三段必须环环相扣,逻辑清楚明了。

一、第一段写作

图表作文有表格(table)、柱形图(bar chart)、饼状图(pie chart)和折线图(diagram)之分,后三种都属于图表的范畴(chart)。不管是chart还是table,都需要进行描述,一般放在文章的第一部分,长度宜适中。描述数据我们要首先看看是几个变量(A),每个变量有几个数据(B),不妨以A*B表示。

如果只有一个变量,有三个数据,

As can beseen clearly in the chart, the average number of hours a student spends onInternet every week has increased from 2 hours in to 8 hours in .

如果是最常见的是2*3的情形,

According to the information implied in thechart, we can see clearly that in a big city in China, state owned houses declinedfrom 75% in 1990 to 60% in 1995 and then to 20% in , while private housesrose from 25% to 40% and then to 80% during the same period.

如果是1*n(n>3)的`情形,将头与尾描述出来即可,比较好的方法就是在句中描述最后一个与第一个相比变化了多少。

碰到多变量、每个变量多数据的情形,大家应首先进行分类,分成上升、下降两类,或者上升、下降、不变三类,如此,问题可以得到解决。

二、第二段写作

第二段是阐释现象、解释原因的段落,在搬出原因,进行论证的时候,一定要注意起承转合,逻辑清楚,我们总结了以下的套用句式。

it isuniversally known that the above-mentioned chart truly demonstrates a socialissue which is becoming more and more popular currently. What prove to be theunderlying reasons for it? Without anydoubt, 3 reasons stated as follows can be adopted to account for it. First andforemost,(阐释具体的现象或原因)more importantly, (阐释具体的现象或原因),last butnot the least.(阐述具体的现象或原因)

三、第三段写作

最后一段着力于根据图表所反映的变化,对它所存在的问题给出一些措施,对它的未来趋势进行展望或者阐述其发展方向。

To sum up,in order to maintain such a sound momentum, a number of great efforts should bemade to take some effective measures in this regard, on the one hand,具体的措施,on the other hand,具体的措施,only in this way,can this momentum be kept smoothly, (如果以上说的是好的趋势) Generallyspeaking, in order to put an end to this bad momentum, some compelling measuresshould be taken into account, on the one hand,具体措施, onthe other hand,具体措施, only if we have taken theabove-mentioned measures ,can this momentum be curbed effectively.(如果以上说的是不好的趋势)

总之,图表作文的写作有一定的规律可循,在写作的过程中,考生们可以套用以上给出的一些重要句子,如此练习、反复实践,必将掌握图表作文的写作套路。

( 考研) ■

篇2:图表作文的写作

as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ______ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.

篇3:图表作文的写作

1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to... 该表格描述了在…年之…年间…数量的变化。

2.the bar chart illustrates that... 该柱状图展示了...

3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding... 该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。

4.the diagram shows (that)... 该图向我们展示了...

5.the pie graph depicts (that).... 该圆形图揭示了...

6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of... 这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。

7.the figures/statistics show (that)... 数据(字)表明...

8.the tree diagram reveals how... 该树型图向我们揭示了如何...

9.the data/statistics show (that)... 该数据(字)可以这样理解...

10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that... 这些数据资料令我们得出结论...

11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table... 如图所示...

12.according to the chart/figures... 根据这些表(数字)...

篇4:图表作文的写作

对于比例的描述中常用的词:

(大比例:Dominate/occupy the majority of/ stand at the largest of proportion of which is…注意词性的替换。)

模板句型:

1.B rank/position second followed immediately/closely by C and D.

B is in the second place.

B is the second most/least popular…

2. 占据(占据多少百分比)

Be/consist/compose/take up…/comprise/constitute/make up/account for/occupies a majority of sth.

E.g. Voluntary workers take up nearly half of the work force in house care sector (医护产业).

Hispanics (a speaking person living into the US. Especially one of Latin American)

综合句型:

1.A be 倍数 as many/much as B(利用句型,雅思考试想要达到高分要求的话,要尽量在主语上下功夫,脑袋里首先想到的主语一定是大家都能想到的,再想想看是否可以用别的主语进行造句)

E.g. Women working as/employed as child minder in the under-35 age group in 1995 were twice as many as in 1990.

Television was twice as popular as washing machine in , with close to 10% of household owning one TV set at home.

(sale volume of television销售量;新高/新低 new high/new low)

主体段落开头必备:

副词

clearly, .../ obviously, .../ apparently, .../ evidently, ...

短语:

According to the table/data, .......

In accordance with the table/data, .....

That从句:

It can be seen from the + 图表+that ......

We can see from the + 图表+that ......

It appears from the data that ......

It indicates from the table that.......

As从句:

As we can see from the data/table, ......

As is reflected in the table, ......

篇5:托福写作备考误区分析

有的同学认为,拿满分的同学一定没有用模板。但是,模板是自己对于“未知性”很大的托福写作考试的最好的准备,哪怕遇到很难的题目,也能自信满满地“噼里啪啦”敲出一两行模板句,然后写作的灵感就来了。如果事先没有任何写作模板的准备,等到考试时脑子一热,就啥也写不出来了,只能面红耳赤地坐在那儿听考场中别人热热闹闹的键盘敲打声。

托福写作中一定要用模板,一定要用模板,一定要用模板!在时间比较紧的综合写作时,用模板可以节约时间,为自己增加信心和底气。

独立写作中,开头、中间段的开头结尾句、结尾都可以用模板,这样自己的句型都尽在自己的掌控内,将更多的时间放在作文内容的构思上。用模板时,不要照搬网上或者机构老师给的模板,自己学聪明一点,DIY拼凑、用同义词、同义句的形式修改一下,就是自己的unique one啦!

篇6:托福写作备考误区分析

许多机构的老师都会信誓旦旦地跟学生说:“字数写不到500字,还想拿高分?”

老师告诉你:曾经有位学员写作考满分,综合写作写了273个字,独立写作也只写了368个字,真心不能算是字数多的。另外一位同学参加考试,洋洋洒洒争分夺秒,考场独立写作打了七百多个字,可最后只有23分,可见字数多不见得就能拿高分。

我的经验是字数可以不多,但是一定要说理具体、条理清晰,句子之间要有逻辑,思维不要太跳跃。考官一天批改那么多作文,当然喜欢读上去很顺畅、连贯的作文啦!

托福写作备考误区三:看写作机经只准备思路

许多同学觉得,只要捧着托福写作机经想想思路,就能在考场上写作得心应手。但是,我认为,托福写作一定要上机练习!想思路和上机亲自写作完全是不一样的感觉!想思路的结果就是,考场上有了思路可却无从下手,对句型的掌握程度、词汇句子的使用和表达完全不熟练,甚至连打字都磕磕绊绊,时时打错,这种不熟练会使自己更加紧张、慌张,从而影响自己的发挥。而如果平时就经常上机练习,考试时就会感到非常心态平和,打字都特别顺畅,写起句子来很熟练,表达清晰,完全就是平时训练的感觉。

托福写作有哪些雷区

托福写作备考误区四:写作语言一定要高大上

许多同学认为,自己拿不了托福写作高分,是因为自己的用词不够华丽,句式太简单。但是其实,很多同学首考时,用的都是最基本的托福水准词语,没有什么大词。但关键是,所用词语一直都在以同义词的方式变换着,句型虽然也只使用了几种,但也是交叉变换着用。变化很重要,这能体现考生对于语言的灵活运用程度,给考官一种新颖的感觉。

托福写作语料库积累:国内和国外的电影哪个更有趣

Movies and TV made in your country are more interesting compared with movies and programs made in another country?是否同意本国的电影比外国的电影更加有趣?(.03.16)

托福写作立场: 外国的电影电视比本国的电影电视更加有趣

托福写作思路拓展

支持外国电影:

1. 外国的电影更加有趣,因为探究未知,满足好奇心是人之本性,由于文化和历史的差异,外国的电影通常对于人们的吸引力更大。例如,我个人喜欢看外国科幻电影,科幻电影畅想未来,可以激发我的想象力和创造力。然而,本国的电影,叙述历史,情节老套,背景熟悉,可以预测故事结局,因此,很多像我一样的年轻人不感兴趣。

2. 看外国电影是一种很好的拓宽视野的方式,放松身心的方式。

3. 外国电影吸引年轻人的另外一个重要的原因就是其优质的制作,很多外国电影,场面恢弘,人物俊美,情节起伏,因此可以给观影人带来持续的新鲜感。

支持国电影:(让步段使用)

本国的电影也有利好,可以加深我们对于本民族文化的洞察,拓宽我们的知识面,激发我们的爱国热情。

托福写作语料库

1. foreign movies or TV programs = movies or TV programs made in another country 外国的电影电视

2. home-made movies or TV programs 本国的电影电视

3. exert a far more profound influence on sb 对于…… 施加了更加深远的影响

4. I enjoy a fairly diverse range of films and TV programs 我喜欢看很多类型的电影和电视节目。

5. The movies and TV shows made in foreign countries can,to larger extent, intrigue my personal interest 外国的电影电视,更大程度上使我感兴趣。

6. arouse my sympathy 引起我的共鸣

7. Science fiction movies can stir my wild imagination and develop my vivid creativity 科幻电影可以激发我丰富想象力以及创造力。

8. bring me constant sense of refreshment 给我带来持久的新鲜感

9. deepen my insight into exotic cultures 加深对于异国文化的洞察

解析:exotic adj.异国情调的

10. When I watch a foreign movie or show, I can always be greatly attracted by its gripping plot,eye-catching heroes and unexpected ending.

看外国的影视剧,我总是被其引人入胜的情节,帅气美丽的主角以及出人意料的结局所吸引。

11. Language is another reason why foreign movies and TV programs can be more fascinating than the counterpart made in one's own country.

语言是另外一个原因,为何外国电影比本国电影更加有吸引力。

12. The debate reminds me of An American classic movie, Titanic ……争议使得想起了经典的美国电影,泰坦尼克

13. Success only favors those who dare to give it a try, take risk, assume responsibilities and accept challenges.

成功青睐哪些敢于尝试,敢于冒险,承担责任以及接受挑战的人。

14. The brave ended up wining honor and enjoying tremendous reputation.

故事的结局是,勇敢者最终获得荣誉以及声名远播

解析:end up doing sth 最终以 ……为结局

15. Many home-made movies fail to arouse my interest and impulse of watching.

很多本国电影无法引起我观看的兴趣和冲动

托福写作语料库积累:度假时是否应该带手机

Some people believe that if people are on vacation, they should leave their mobile phones at home ,to what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人认为人们在度假的时候应该把手机留在家里,你是否认同?

托福写作立场 人们在旅行的时候,携带手机是利大于弊

托福写作思路拓展

旅行时携带手机的好处:

1. 手机的一些功能可以给旅行提供具体的帮助,例如手机的APP地图软件,就可以帮助游客在谋生的城市,准确定位,及时找到目的地。同样,游客们可以使用手机预订机票和酒店。

2. 携带手机可以随时和家人朋友保持联系,尤其是在发生紧急事件的时候。

3. 手机本身具有强大的娱乐功能,可以作为旅途中一种消遣的方式。例如,我在旅行的时候,喜欢使用手机听歌、照相和刷微信。

旅行时携带手机的弊端(用于让步段):

我不得不承认,携带手机度假有时候也会有其弊端,尤其是对于难得休闲的职场人士而言,度假的目的是为了暂时地放下工作的压力和烦恼,如果旅行中突然收到公司的业务电话,需要自己结束旅行,也是令人苦恼的,但是,我认为这种情况的发生的概率还是很小的。

托福写作语料库

1. Vacation is a time for relaxation 度假是为了放松。

2. People’s preferences differ greatly in determining whether or not it is advisable to take a cell phone when they take a few days off in some hot scenic spots.

在一些热门的旅游景区度假的时候,是否携带手机,人们的喜好差异很大。

解析:People’s preferences differ greatly in determining whether or not it is advisable to do sth 关于是否做……是明智的,人们的喜好不同。

3. As for me,the merits of taking a phone outweigh its possible demerits.

对于我而言,我认为携带手机的利大于弊。

解析:the merits of …… outweigh its possible demerits ……的利大于弊

4. Taking a cell phone can help us keep in touch with our family members and friends, especially in time of emergency.

携带手机可以帮助我们和家庭成员和朋友保持联系,尤其是在发生紧急情况的时候。

解析:in time of …… 在……的时候

5. When spending holiday, people usually choose to visit some unfamiliar cities or countries,if they take a cell phone, then ,they can deal with crisis easily .

度假的时候,人们喜欢选择陌生的城市和国家,如果他们携带手机,那么,他们很容易危机处理。

解析:if …… then …… 如果…… 那么……

6. Taking a mobile phone is of great necessity for us because it is a good source of entertainment.

携带手机对于我们是必要的,因为,手机是很好的娱乐的源泉。

解析:It is a good source of entertainment 这是娱乐的源泉。

7. While travelling, people may have to spend great amounts of time on taking various public transit, seeking hotels or booking tickets,in this sense,using the various cell phone APP softwares can be time-saving and trouble-saving.

度假的时候,人们需要花费大量的时间乘坐公共交通工具,选择酒店,预定机票,因此,使用手机的APP软件可以省时省力。

解析:take various public transit v 乘坐各种公共交通工具

8. The mighty entertainment function of the cell phone can be used as a good stress-reducer. 使用手机强大的娱乐功能,是一种很好的缓解压力的方式。

解析:…… is a good stress-reducer ……是很好的缓解压力的方式

9. Playing on-line games, listening to favorite music or watching humorous movies can an ideal way to relax our bodies and ease our minds.

玩在线游戏,听我们喜爱的歌曲,看相关的幽默电影还是理想的方式放松身心。

解析:…… is an deal way to relax our bodies and ease our minds ……是很好的方式来放松我们的身心

10. Indeed,I have to concede that taking cell phones on vacation is never without its demerits.

我不得不承认的是,度假时携带手机不是没有其弊端。

解析:is never without 远非没有……

11. Constant phone calls may ruin our holidays不断地接听手机也许会毁掉我们的假期。

解析:ruin our holidays v 毁掉我们假期

12. The purpose of spending holidays is to temporarily to take a rest from stressful and arduous work.

度假的目的是为了暂时地放下工作中的压力。

解析:stressful adj 压力大

解析:arduous adj 繁重的;费力的

13. It must be quite annoying if an emergent phone call requires us to end our hardly earned vacation.

如果旅行中突然收到公司的业务电话,需要自己结束旅行,也是令人苦恼的

解析:It must be quite annoying if …… 如果……一定是令人苦脑的

解析:hardly earned vacation n 来之不易的假期

14. However, the incidence of this situation is very small because those who are on vacations, in most cases,will perfectly handle their problems in advance.

但是,我认为这种情况发生的机会是很小的,因为度假者通常会事先做好工作安排。

15. Overall,I am still convinced that it is wise to take cell phones during the vacation.

总之,度假的时候带着手机是有利好的。

解析:Overall,I am still convinced that …… 总之,我深信……

解析:it is wise to do sth 做……是明智的

解析:impulse n冲动

16. A good domestic movie or TV show might also be captivating.

本国制作的电影电视,也许也是有意思的。

解析:captivating 引起兴趣的;有魅力的

拓展:amusing = interesting 有意思的

拓展:fascinating =attractive 有吸引力的

17. arouse our patriotism 激发我们爱国热情

18. deepen our insight into national culture and history. 加深我们对于民族历史和文化洞察

19. In comparison with A, I have a preference for B 和…… 对比,我更加喜欢……

20. I prefer to do sth rather than do sth 我喜欢做…… 胜过做……

托福写作

篇7:高考分析备考动员会简报

高考分析备考动员会简报

201x年10月11日和12日,睢宁县教育局分别在睢宁高级中学南校和北校召开睢宁县201x届高考质量分析暨201x届高考备考动员会,参加会议的有:睢宁县副县长XX,睢宁高级中学管委会主任XX,睢宁县教育局局长XX,睢宁县教育局分管教学副局长XX,睢宁高级中学(南校)校长XX,睢宁高级中学(北校)校长XX,睢宁县教育局基教科科长XX,睢宁县教育局教研室全体高中教研员,睢宁高级中学南校和北校全体高三任课教师。会议由睢宁县教育局XX副局长主持。

会议主要目的是总结睢宁高级中学南校和北校201x届高三备考的经验、并对高考情况进行科学有效的数据分析,对201x届高考备考工作进行了动员和部署。

会议首先由县教研室魏本义副主任对睢中南北校201x年高考数据进行了多角度、多维度、全方位、全面的剖析,找出并分析睢中南北校高考的亮点和不足并提出努力的方向和改进的措施。

XX副局长从横向和纵向运用数据说明睢中南北校的高考情况及存在的问题。他说,我们触底反弹,潜力最大,空间巨大。同时,强调了我们正在积极深入推进的“学讲方式”是提高课堂高效和教育教学质量的最好模式。

XX局长首先强调教育局就是为学校、为教师、为学生提供服务的行政机关。她说,我们今天的会议一要正确面对和分析谷底的形势,感受社会各方面期盼的压力;二要提升我们的信心,信心来自于县委县政府的关心和关爱,信心来自于我们曾经有过的辉煌,信心来自于我们有一支优秀的团队,信心来自于曾经落后的兄弟县市后来崛起的经验启示;三要明确目标,确保明年高考有较大提升,用三至四年时间进入徐州市第一方阵,用五至八年时间领跑徐州市第一方阵。

XX校长说,今天会议我们要客观地承认存在的问题与不足,我们睢宁中学南北校要跳出睢宁看自己,在全市、全省名校中比自己,在高考上我们还有很大提升的空间和可挖掘的巨大潜力。上级领导对我们睢宁中学给予期待和支持,这对我们教师是莫大的鼓舞和鞭策。我们要猛醒和深思,自加压力,奋起直追,勇攀高峰。这次会议既是分析高考形势,研究问题,明确对策的会议,又是加油鼓劲冲刺明年高考的誓师会,也是我们共商学校发展大计的会议,我们要倍感责任重大,我们要奋进担当,不辱使命,再创睢宁中学教育教学新篇章!

最后,吕亚凯副县长给我们寄语了殷切的'希望,他首先向取得高考可喜成绩的教育局、睢宁中学南北两校表示祝贺!向辛勤工作、默默奉献的所有教职员工表示诚挚的敬意!关于今年高考,要在成绩中寻找差距,在差距中激发动力,要以今天的会议为起点,从头开始,从头再来,踏上高考备考的征程,高考目标已经明确,备考工作已经部署,我们要把握机遇,迎接挑战,以更加振奋的精神,更加昂扬的斗志,更加务实的作风,扎实抓好高考各项工作,努力完成高考目标任务,实现睢宁县高考质量新跨越,为“建设教育强县,共创美好睢宁”作出新的更大贡献!

这次高考分析和动员会开的很成功,这次会议规格之高、形式之新、内容之实、效果之强,在我县高考教学工作会议上是史无前例的,相信,明年高考定会为全县137万人民交上一份满意的答卷!

篇8:托福写作备考技巧分析

综合写作部分是听力和写作的结合,不需要大家发表个人观点,因此考察的是听力能力和复述的能力。在听力前的三分钟要认真阅读题目中的文字,文字中会有3个支持文字观点的论据,听力则会针对这三个观点逐个展开。对于听力部分,同样提醒大家要多做笔记,记住细节,在作文展开中体现出来。因为综合写作的模式比较固定,因此可以提前准托福写作模板:如何提升社区环境备好模版和固定的句式。注意,篇的综合写作定有变化多样的句式,这个在我们准备模版的时候定要体现出来。

托福写作模板:如何提升社区环境

What is the most useful action for people to help environment in their local communities?

1. Plant trees and create parks

2. Persuade local shops to stop providing plastic bags for consumers

3. Increase access to public transportation (such as buses and trains), and reduce the automobiles on roads

托福写作范文参考:

9月3日托福独立写作范文:

With the sense of community becoming much stronger, how to protect the environment of local communities has never failed to attract the attention of the general public. Therefore, when it comes to which is the most feasible measure to help environment, among planting trees and building parks, encouraging local shops to stop using plastic bags, and improving public transportation, people's notions may vary from one to another. Towards such a long-running tug-of-war, I am inclined to claim that the first option is the best.

Firstly, growing trees and constructing parks can definitely help to ameliorate the environment. For one thing, more trees will contribute to the improvement of the air quality of the whole neighborhood. As is common sense, the prosperous industrial development has produced large amounts of waste gas, with the result that the haze and smoggy weather shroud quite frequently the major cities in our country. The current air condition necessitates the planting of trees, which can purify the contaminated air to a large extent. In other words, trees, the lung of the earth, play a vital role in absorbing some harmful gas and producing more fresh air through photosynthesis. For another, the public parks can be helpful to increase the biodiversity of the local community. Accompanying the rapid urbanization, an increasing number of natural lands have been utilized for constructing factories, shopping mall and skyscrapers, which greatly diminishes the natural habitats of animals, such as birds and squirrels. In this case, parks become the only place which can serve as habitats for those animals. Accordingly, the species of animals living here can become more diverse.

In addition, there are certain limitations for the other two options. Admittedly, reducing the use of plastic bags and making public transportation more accessible may also be conducive to the environmental protection in some degrees. To illustrate, if the plastic bags are prohibited, the so-called white pollution will be relieved. Also, easier access to public transportation means less use of private cars, which leads to the reduction of car exhaust. However, in comparison to planting trees and building parks, the above two measures enjoy less popularity among the residents of the community and thus are unlikely to be implemented. The underlying reason is that growing trees and constructing parks can create a more comfortable living environment while the other two choices can bring about more inconvenience. To be more specific, if shops stop the use of plastic shopping bags, the customers have to take a cloth bag while shopping. Also, taking public transportation will take longer time than driving the private cars, which means that commuters have to get up much earlier than before. It is self-evident that whether a policy can be carried out directly determines its effect, which is especially true of the above situation.

Taking what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that the most effective way of protecting environment in local communities is to plant trees and create parks.

托福写作模板:年轻人应尝试不同工作

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.

题目大意:在决定长期工作之前,年轻人应该尝试不同的工作。此题并不难,思路也很容易想。建议,选择同意,理由一可以获得多种技能,理由二可以找到自己最合适的职业。

托福写作模板及参考答案:

托福写作范文参考:

Currently, with the competition in the job market becoming increasingly fierce, the job-hunting has been brought under the spotlight of the mass media. The senior and experts strongly proposed that young people should try different jobs before taking a lifelong career, while the youngsters may hold the opposite viewpoint. As far as I am concerned, the former view is more reasonable, with the reasons listed below.

In the first place, different jobs will equip the young with multiple skills and professional knowledge in various fields. As we know, the completion of every job, simple or complex, requires differing abilities and expertise in certain area. As a result, young adults who take different jobs will grasp the knowledge in a new area and increase their potential capability to a large extent, thus having the well-rounded development. To be specific, to be a waiter or waitress in a restaurant enables us to cultivate interpersonal skills since we may encounter tons of people from all walks of life. Being a manager will help to improve the organizational skills and leadership, because the successful running of a department depends on the ability of leaders. Undoubtedly, those people with more than one skills will have an edge over other competitors in the future job market.

In addition, another conspicuous benefit of taking different jobs before you settle on the lifelong career is that the young have the chances to find the most suitable position. It is never uncommon to hear that many employees who have worked for three or more years complain that the work they take is not what they are good at or what they like. Consequently, their enthusiasm or passion for their jobs is relatively in a low level, which has negative influence on the development of themselves and their company. The best way to deal with the above problem is to allow youngsters to try different types of work at first and take the one which suits them most. The experience of my friend, Kozer, is a good case in point. After graduating from the department of foreign languages in Beijing University, Kozer was recruited by a Foreign Trade Corporation due to his excellent English. Unfortunately, he was too introverted to communicate well with strangers, especially with foreigners. Then he resigned from the position and became a teacher in a high school. The same problem occurred again. Finally, realizing his own strengths and weaknesses from the above failures, he found that the most suitable position for himself was to be an editor for China Daily, the most famous English newspaper, because there was no need to talk with many people in this job.

Admittedly, some opponents may assert that it is not necessary for young adults to try different jobs, because it will waste lots of time and even make them miss out some opportunities. However, the above reasoning is far from the truth. To illustrate, only when we have experienced several different kinds of work can we find the one which most fits for us. So the time spent on every try is worthwhile.

In a nutshell, it is safe to conclude that young people should try different jobs before they take a long-term career, in order to gain more skills and find the most suitable position.

篇9:GRE写作特点分析备考要点

GRE写作特点分析备考要点

GRE写作和托福写作相同点

首先必须肯定的一点是,GRE写作和托福写作是存在一定共同点的,毕竟是ETS座下的同门弟子,对于考生在写作方面的基本要求还是比较相近的,比如基础的英语写作能力、文章的整体框架搭建、论述的逻辑思维水平、遣词造句的能力等等。这些方面两者的要求可以说是基本一致的。而从题型角度上来看,GRE写作中的ISSUE也和托福写作里的独立写作有近似的题目要求,也就是根据题目提出自己的观点并进行论述,也就是中文里常说的立论文。所以在小编看来,能在托福写作中拿到20多分,至少可以说明考生在GRE写作评分标准的写作技术层面上是能够达到考试要求的。

GRE写作题目深度远超托福写作

既然写作技术没有问题,那么为何托福考生的GRE作文得分却并不理想呢?原因其实很简单,作文题目本身的深度根本不在一个层次上。大家可以回想一下托福考试作文特别是独立写作,问的问题内容是不是都涉及比较基础的认知内容,大多数都是围绕大家熟悉的常见话题比如学校生活日常活动等等,即使是社会现象也是大家能够随口就说出一些看法事例的“大路货”。而GRE考试的作文题目就完全不同的,来看下面两个例子:

“Truly profound thinkers and highly creative artists are always out of step with their time and their society.”

真正影响深远的思想家和具有高度创造力的艺术家们总是超越时代和社会的。

“Rituals and ceremonies help define a culture. Without them, societies or groups of people have a diminished sense of who they are.”

典礼仪式有助于定义一种文化。没有了它们,社会或者人类群体就会削弱对对自身的认知。

这两道题目都是小编随手从ETS的GRE官方ISSUE作文题库中选出来的题目,可能很多人刚看到这两个题目都会觉得比较懵,既不知道应该赞同还是反对,一时半会儿也想不出可以举出的例子,可以说用中文都觉得不太好写的题目,更不用说用英语去写了。而GRE作文题目中这样的题其实并不在少数。也就是说GRE写作从题目深度上远非托福作文可比。即使考生拥有足够的写作能力和技巧,面对不知道动笔的话题也很难发挥出自己的水平,得分当然也就会受到影响了。

从GRE官方题库中寻求突破点

那么,对于这些其实已经具备足够写作技能,但却缺乏积累或者说知识面不太够的同学,怎样才能拿到更为理想的GRE作文分数呢?小编认为方法既可以说很简单也可以说很困难,那就是刷题库。说这个方法简单,是因为ETS可能已经考虑到大家会存在知识面不宽之类的问题而公开了题库,理论上考生只要能够把所有的ISSUE和ARGUMENT题目都看一遍了解一下,就能提前做好准备不至于被完全无话可说没东西可写的题目打个措手不及。说很困难则是因为题库里面的题目实在有点多,ISSUE和ARGUMENT的题目总数接近500道,即使去掉一些重复的题目也有超过300道题需要大家逐一准备,工作量和耗费时间可以预期都是比较惊人的。对此,小编的建议是既然不需要再重新练习写作技能,那么有托福写作高分基础的考生在备考GRE写作时就可以把重心放在看题库研究题目上,尽早开始看题库,对题目以熟悉内容构思论点思路和储备论证素材为主,而不要试图去把每个题目都写一遍。这样的做法可以最大程度节省大家的考试时间,也能帮助考生从写作的内容层面充实基础提升水平为作文高分做好准备。

GRE写作:怎么模仿范文

1.要有可以模仿的文章(最好是带有说理性的文章)。

2.你要理解这个文章,理解它的用词、句子结构、段落结构。

3.这些文章都有正确的中文翻译。同时,文章的长度不能超过500字。

怎么模仿,首先要分析文章,分析每一句和上一句是什么关系。我给大家举个例子:美国人写作文的一个特点是,通常每段的第一句都包含了整段文字的内容,也就是我们常说的topic sentence.。另一个特点是当你写完一个句子后,你要问WHY。你提出一个问题,然后给出一个圆满的回答,这就是一篇优秀的作文。

再下一步就要具体了。写作需要三大能力:

一、具体化的能力

具体化并不代表要写一个完整的故事。但是任何一篇文章都要给人一个具体的意向。通过具体的东西来描述才能给人踏实的感觉。具体化只要举出几个地方、几个名字、几件小事就可以了。

为什么好多同学作文中分数很低呢,就是因为他提出了问题却没有回答。

你通过不断地模仿写作,就可以不断地纠正语法和词组错误。如何把抽象和具体结合起来是一个重点,如何在一个段落中只表达一个思想,这是另一个重点。美国人的判分特点是,如果你在一段中表达了一个以上的思想,那你的分数就不会高了。

分析完一篇文章后,怎么模仿着写呢?就是看着中文的翻译,把上面的英文一字不落的写下来,当你实在想不起来的时候,再看原文。等到写完之后,和原文对照一下,看看是谁写得漂亮。我刚刚开始模仿写作的时候发现,模仿了几天后,写作水平的确提高了。

因为根据记忆学原则,这个单词你背过、读过,它都不能写在你的文章中间。如果一个单词可以经常出现在你的脑子和文章中间,那这只证明了一件事,就是你写过这个字。但是你自己写作你不可能用到这个字,那就只有一个可能,就是你在模仿文章时写过这个字。如果一个结构别人写不出来,你能写出来,那你的分数就会高。

通过不断地模仿你的几大能力就会得到提高:

1.你的语法错误会越来越少;

2.句子结构能力越来越强;

3.用词能力大大增加。

一篇文章模仿两次就足够了。当你模仿了10篇文章之后,你把这10篇文章再模仿一遍。等你模仿完20篇文章,你的写作能力就会大大提高了。

二、逻辑思维能力

在美国许多的写作考试中TOEFL写作是相对容易的。因为它的作文题本身非常简单,看到一个作文题你几乎就知道该怎么写。而GRE作文就相对复杂了。 GRE作文方式永远是两种态度,两种方式让你选择。它永远是有对照性的。

托福作文考:“吃饭是在家里吃好,还是到饭店里吃好”; GMAT考和商业有关的:“产品制造出来是延续时间很长的好,还是延续时间不太长的好”;GRE作文:“在我们这个社会中间,现在专业人士太多了,而有综合知识的人太少了。你认为我们是更需要具有专业知识的人呢,还是需要具有广博知识的人?”

TOEFL考生活、学习;GRE 考日常学术行为。但是不管它出什么题目,总是会摆出两种态度供你选择。另外,GRE的作文题目是提前发给你的,考试时出的题目绝不会超出它事先发给你的题目。它决不会出让学生看不懂的题目。所出的题目永远是世界性的,不涉及民族、宗教、政治色彩。

考察普林斯顿所出的全部范文后发现,美国人百分之七八十喜欢倾向于一种模式。讨论在哪里吃的问题时,要不在家里吃,要不在饭店吃,但是你不要又想在家里,又想在饭店(A OR B)。当然他们也比较认可中间的态度(C),也就是说,我既要A又要B,我是A和B结合起来产生C。事实上,好多中国学生结合 A、B写是能写出好分数的。当然也有些题目是没有C这种态度的。

C态度这种写法和A、B的写法,在段落结构上是有差异的。我先讲两种文章的段落结构。

如果是采取A或B的写法,段落结构是比较简单的。通常分为三个层次,第一个层次是第一段。说明我要采取A还是B。第二个层次可以不只一段,说明为什么选择A/B是对的。为什么要有三段呢。因为必须至少有2个理由,至多3个理由。美国人认为一个理由是不够的,4个理由绝对太多。他们最喜欢 2到3个理由。最后一段就是结尾,讨论B的缺点和部分优点,同时坚决强调你要选择A。

GRE写作:怎样准备提纲

1、什么时候开始练习在模考时加入提纲?

比较适合的是在最后10天到一周的样子。因为这首先需要在一定高强度的写作练习之后,再者,需要对题目已经有了一定的把握。很多的提纲在之前都大体列过。然后在限时中加入提纲的写作。

2、用多长时间列提纲?

我的经验是ISSUE总体比ARGU短。ISSUE大体要2-3分钟,ARGU怎么都要3分钟。可能要5分钟。

3、提纲里都要包含些什么?

对ISSUE来说,读第一遍题目时把关键词提出来,接着将核心话题列出来,根据这个话题开始一条一条列出你要写的东西;ARGU来说,因为题目比较长,所以读题的时间就要比前者长。第一遍建议先把每一个意群讲的是什么简要提出来,排上序号;第二从这些小短句分析其文章结构和主要错误;第三把自己对错误的阐述顺序列出来。这样差不多是可以的了。

4、列提纲的一些技巧

需要在练习中找到自己的记录法,哪种缩写是自己看得明了的。要记出来的摘要最后自己还要辨析几分钟。建议在平时列提纲的时候就有意识的做一下限定时间练习,看2-3分钟能不能把大体的框架列出来。

英语写作

篇10:雅思图表小作文分析

1.2015年2月7日 Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract local people.

2.2015年10月31日Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially supported by government. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

3.2016年4月16日When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

4.2016年4月2日 Multicultural societies, where people of different groups live together, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

雅思图表作文的写作注意事项

雅思写作上半年总结及下半年备考分析

高一英语图表作文写作指导

雅思考试TASK图表写作套句

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